Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is direct and concise, which is good. To improve, expand slightly with one supporting detail (e.g., what you study or year) using a linking phrase to sound more natural and informative. Keep the response to no more than 2–3 sentences.

예시: I am a student — I'm currently studying biology at Masai University and I'm in my second year.

제안: The answer gives useful information but is slightly disorganized and contains some grammar mistakes. Use a clear topic sentence naming the university, then add 1–2 coherent supporting details using linking words (because/so/therefore). Avoid redundant phrases and fix verb forms and prepositions.

예시: I study at Masai University in Banda S Janaki, Selangor. Because it is quite close to my home, I commute by car and I live at home rather than in the university hostel.

제안: Good points about facilities and international students. Improve naturalness by using a clear topic sentence and smoother linking language (for example, moreover/in addition). Correct names if necessary and avoid awkward phrasing like "I sure Master University".

예시: Yes, I think Masai University is an excellent place to study because it has modern facilities. In addition, there are many international students, which helps broaden your cultural experience and academic perspective.

제안: The response is clear and gives reasons, which is good. Improve grammar (tense and article usage) and use a linking phrase to present the reason more smoothly. Limit to two sentences max and avoid repetition.

예시: No, I wouldn't want any major changes because Masai University has a pedestrian-friendly campus with easy access. Therefore, students can walk freely around campus without needing to take a bus.

제안: You give a clear intention, which is good. Improve coherence by combining sentences and explaining reasons more precisely with correct vocabulary (e.g., "healthcare field" instead of "compartment"). Avoid vague phrases like "swamped with"; instead say "increasingly influenced by AI". Keep answer to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I'm still deciding, but I would like to pursue medicine because I believe healthcare will remain a crucial human-centered field as artificial intelligence becomes more widespread. In addition, I want to help people directly and apply scientific knowledge in practice.

× I study in Masai University at Banda S Janaki, Selangor.

✓ I study at Masai University in Banda S Janaki, Selangor.

Use 'study at' with institutions and 'in' with locations. 'in Masai University' is incorrect collocation; 'at Masai University' is correct. Also 'at Banda S Janaki' should be 'in Banda S Janaki' to indicate the area.

× Since it is quite near from my house so I went.

✓ Since it is quite near my house, I go there.

The phrase 'near from' is incorrect; use 'near' without 'from'. Tense inconsistency: the student is describing a habitual action so use present tense 'I go' not past 'I went'. Also 'so' is redundant after 'since' and a comma improves clarity.

× So I go there by car and we'll be staying at home instead of the hostel.

✓ I go there by car and I stay at home instead of in the hostel.

Maintain present simple for habitual actions: 'I go' and 'I stay'. 'we'll be staying' (future continuous) is inconsistent with context and subject; the student refers to themselves ('I'), so use 'I stay at home instead of in the hostel'. Include 'in the hostel' for correct prepositional phrase.

× Yes, I sure Master University is a good place to study because of the facilities.

✓ Yes, I am sure Masai University is a good place to study because of the facilities.

Missing verb 'am' after 'I' to form 'I am sure'. Proper noun corrected to 'Masai University' (consistent). 'I sure' is informal and ungrammatical.

× Other than that, I also think it is a good place for you to widen your experience and knowledge because at the university there are a lot of international students.

✓ Other than that, I also think it is a good place for you to broaden your experience and knowledge because there are a lot of international students at the university.

Sentence is mostly correct but 'widen' collocation is less natural than 'broaden'. Move 'at the university' to the end for natural word order: 'there are a lot of international students at the university'.

× Honestly I would say no because Masai University is a pedestrian friendly campus and strategically designed for easy access.

✓ Honestly, I would say no because Masai University is a pedestrian-friendly campus and is strategically designed for easy access.

Add hyphen in 'pedestrian-friendly' as a compound adjective before a noun. Also add 'is' before 'strategically designed' to complete the clause.

× You can walk freely using the pedestrian and didn't have to take a bus to go somewhere.

✓ You can walk freely using the pedestrian paths and don't have to take a bus to go anywhere.

'didn't have to' is past tense; use 'don't have to' to match present general statement. 'pedestrian' as a noun is incomplete; 'pedestrian paths' or 'pedestrian walkways' is needed. Use 'anywhere' instead of 'somewhere' for generality.

× Honestly, I am still contemplating about it but I would like to pursue medicine.

✓ Honestly, I am still contemplating it, but I would like to pursue medicine.

'Contemplate' is transitive and does not require 'about'; use 'contemplating it' or 'contemplating what to do'. Add comma before 'but' to join clauses.

× It is because I think in the future our world will be swamped with artificial intelligence and being a doctor or in healthcare compartment.

✓ This is because I think in the future our world will be swamped with artificial intelligence, and I want to be a doctor or work in the healthcare sector.

Sentence needs clear subject and parallel structure. Replace 'It is because' with 'This is because' and add subject 'I' before 'want'. 'Being a doctor or in healthcare compartment' is ungrammatical; use parallel verbs or phrases: 'be a doctor' or 'work in the healthcare sector'. 'compartment' is wrong word; use 'sector' or 'field'. Also add comma before 'and' to separate clauses.