Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a slightly longer reply that starts with a clear topic sentence and adds a brief supporting detail (e.g., level or field of study). Keep it natural and concise (no more than 3–4 short sentences).

예시: I am a student. I’m currently studying undergraduate business management at a local university, and I’m in my second year.

제안: Respond with one clear topic sentence naming the place, then add one specific supporting detail (e.g., the institution or a feature of the city) using a linking word to connect ideas. Avoid repeating general adjectives without specifics.

예시: I study in Guangdong province at Dongguan University. Dongguan is a busy manufacturing city, but it also has pleasant parks and good public transport.

제안: Answer directly, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (because, so, or as). Avoid trailing off and complete your sentences. Keep it within three sentences maximum.

예시: Yes, it’s a good place to study because the university campus is peaceful and has modern facilities. Also, the air quality in my neighborhood is generally good, so I can concentrate on my work.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence stating a specific change, then explain why that change matters using a linking word (for example, because or so). Make sure to finish your sentence and avoid repetition. One or two supporting details are enough.

예시: Yes, I would like the roads near campus to be repaired because potholes make commuting by bike dangerous. If they fixed the roads, students would have safer and faster journeys to class.

제안: Start with a direct statement of your plan, then add a specific detail about where or why using linking words (because, so that) and avoid hesitations. Keep it to two sentences for clarity.

예시: I plan to study abroad for a master’s degree, ideally in the UK or Canada. I want to specialize in international business so that I can gain global experience and improve my career prospects.

× I study in Guangdong province. Dongguan City is a beautiful city.

✓ I study in Guangdong Province. Dongguan City is a beautiful city.

The main issue is capitalization of a proper noun, not tense; however it fits present tense context. Use 'Province' capitalized when part of a proper name and ensure consistency: 'Guangdong Province'. The sentence tense is correct (simple present for habitual fact). Suggestion: capitalize proper nouns and maintain simple present for facts.

× Of course, Dongguan City has a good environment, the air quality is good, the.

✓ Of course. Dongguan City has a good environment and good air quality.

The original sentence is fragmented and repeats 'the' at the end, causing a sentence structure error. Combine the two related clauses with 'and' and remove the stray 'the'. Use simple present for general statements. Suggestion: avoid trailing words and connect related ideas with conjunctions.

× Of course I wish the the road can be fix can be fixed and the.

✓ Of course. I wish the road could be fixed.

Multiple issues: repeated 'the', incorrect modal and verb form. For wishes about present situations, use 'could' (or 'would') plus base verb or use passive 'be fixed'. The verb 'fix' must be in past participle 'fixed' after passive construction. Also remove the extraneous 'and the'. Suggestion: use 'I wish the road could be fixed' for polite expression of desired change.

× I wish I can study abroad for a higher education and uh.

✓ I wish I could study abroad for higher education.

When expressing a wish about a situation that is not certain or is contrary to the current reality, use 'could' (past modal) not 'can'. Also 'higher education' does not need the article 'a' in this context. Remove filler 'uh'. Suggestion: say 'I wish I could study abroad for higher education' to sound natural and grammatically correct.