Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and directly state your status first, then give one or two clear reasons. Avoid repetition and filler words (uh, I, I). Use correct grammar for phrases like "I don't have" and "I am focused on my studies."

예시: I am a first-year student, so I don’t work because my course load is heavy. For example, I have lectures and lab sessions most days, so I need to focus on my studies.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence naming your university and major. Use correct noun forms (major in Biology or training to be a biology teacher). Avoid awkward phrasing and add one specific detail about why you like the subject, using linking words for clarity.

예시: I study at Baku State University, where I am training to be a biology teacher. I enjoy the subject because I am fascinated by how living things reproduce, and I like learning about genetics and cell biology.

제안: Answer directly and avoid repeating words. Use precise adjectives (knowledgeable, kind, helpful). Mention one or two specific facilities or examples to support your opinion and use linking words like "because" or "for example."

예시: Yes, I think Baku State University is an excellent place to study because the professors are knowledgeable and helpful. For example, the university provides modern laboratories and well-equipped computer rooms that support our learning.

제안: Give a clear suggestion and explain why, using correct grammar and specific improvements. Replace vague phrases like "enhance program" with concrete changes (more labs, updated equipment, better curriculum). Use linking words such as "because" and "for instance."

예시: Yes, I would like some improvements because biology students have limited access to laboratories. For instance, I would like more lab rooms with modern microscopes and more practical classes in the curriculum so we can gain hands-on experience.

제안: Provide a clear sequence: state your main goal, then give specific steps and reasons. Use correct grammar: "get a master's degree," "move up the career ladder," and name the country correctly: "to study in Latvia." Avoid fillers and be concise.

예시: I plan to get a master's degree to advance my career. First, I will prepare for the IELTS to achieve a high score, and then I hope to study in Latvia to gain international experience.

× Currently, I am a student and I am a freshman student, uh, but I am not work because I haven't a lot of time.

✓ Currently I am a student and a freshman, but I do not work because I do not have a lot of time.

The original sentence has sentence structure and verb usage issues: 'I am not work' is incorrect because 'work' requires an auxiliary 'do' in negative present simple. Also 'I haven't a lot of time' uses 'have' incorrectly without 'got' or 'do' auxiliary in this context. Suggestion: use 'I do not work' and 'I do not have a lot of time' to form correct negative statements in present simple; remove redundant 'student' after 'freshman' for concision.

× Uh, I don't have a lot of time uh, to work.

✓ I do not have a lot of time to work.

This is mainly a redundancy and style issue: use full form 'do not' or contraction consistently and remove filler 'uh'. The verb and meaning are fine; simplifying improves clarity.

× So I, I, uh, engrossed in my uh, study notice.

✓ So I am engrossed in my studies.

The original lacks proper verb tense and noun form: 'engrossed' needs an auxiliary 'am' to form present passive/participial adjective usage, and 'study notice' is incorrect—use plural 'studies'. Suggestion: use 'I am engrossed in my studies' to express being fully absorbed in studying.

× Currently I study Baku State University, my major is biology teacher and I really I keen on my study and I like to know how living things are reproductive they how reproductive.

✓ Currently I study at Baku State University; my major is biology (teaching). I am really keen on my studies and I like to know how living things reproduce.

Several errors: 'study Baku State University' needs preposition 'at' (preposition error ID 11 but primary is article/structure); 'my major is biology teacher' is incorrect noun use—say 'biology (teaching)' or 'to be a biology teacher'; 'I really I keen' needs auxiliary 'am' (present tense/structure); 'study' should be plural 'studies'; 'how living things are reproductive' is incorrect word order and form—use 'how living things reproduce' (verb form). Corrections address preposition, verb forms, and noun choice.

× Yes, yes, I think that, uh, Baku State University is the best place, uh, to study because it has a very knowledgeable, kindful and helpful teacher And, uh, it has a good, uh, device and technological system, uh, for students.

✓ Yes, I think that Baku State University is a great place to study because it has very knowledgeable, kind, and helpful teachers, and it has good equipment and technological systems for students.

Problems: singular/plural and word choice: 'teacher' should be plural 'teachers' when speaking generally (singular/plural issue ID 1), 'kindful' is not standard—use 'kind', 'device' should be 'equipment'. Capitalization and filler words removed. Use parallel structure and plural nouns when referring to a group.

× Yes, I want because as a biologist student there are there aren't advantages laboratory and we struggle of this reason.

✓ Yes, I do, because as a biology student there are not adequate laboratory facilities and we struggle for this reason.

Multiple issues: 'biologist student' incorrect—use 'biology student' (noun form), 'there are there aren't advantages laboratory' is garbled; use 'there are not adequate laboratory facilities' (there be issue and word order), 'we struggle of this reason' should be 'we struggle for this reason' (preposition). Pronoun 'I want' alone is vague; better 'I do' to answer yes/no. Corrections address pronoun/word form and preposition.

× I want to enhance laboratory rooms and enhance program.

✓ I want to improve the laboratory rooms and the program.

Use article 'the' to refer to specific 'laboratory rooms' and 'program'. 'Enhance' is acceptable but 'improve' is more natural; include 'the' before nouns when specific (article error ID 22). Also make parallel nouns plural/clear.

× I want uh, to, uh, acquire master degree, and I want uh, to move up my uh, career ladder because I have a lot of dreams at first.

✓ I want to acquire a master's degree, and I want to move up my career ladder because I have many dreams.

Errors: 'acquire master degree' needs article and possessive form 'a master's degree'; 'a lot of dreams at first' is unnatural—use 'many dreams' or 'many goals'. Remove fillers and unnecessary 'at first'. Article and noun form corrections applied.

× I want uh, to get a high score uh in IELTS, and I want to move uh, Latvia for a study.

✓ I want to get a high score in the IELTS, and I want to move to Latvia to study.

Preposition and infinitive use: 'move Latvia for a study' should be 'move to Latvia to study' (use 'to' after 'move' and infinitive 'to study'). Also use article 'the' with many exams: 'the IELTS' is common. This fixes preposition and verb infinitive structure.