Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 句子结构不太自然且有语法错误。回答应直接开门见山，并用一到两句简明说明专业和目的，避免多余疑问语气。可以改进时态与词汇（e.g. negotiation skills），并控制在五句以内。

예시: I'm a student at Beijing International Studies University, majoring in Business English. My degree helps me improve both my language ability and my negotiation skills for a future business career.

제안: 表达重复且有语法错误（e.g. "I'm studying as BISU", "rarely" 使用不当）。应直接说明学校并给出具体支持细节，使用连词使信息连贯。避免填充词如 "uh"。

예시: I study at Beijing International Studies University, which offers many opportunities for presentations and group discussions. As a result, I can practise English with classmates from different countries, which improves my communication skills and confidence.

제안: 回答总体清晰但有小语法错误（"can helps" 应为 "helps"）。可用一到两句补充具体例子以增强说服力，如描述课堂活动或校园资源。保持简洁自然。

예시: Yes, absolutely. It's an excellent place to study because I can practise English with students from many countries. For example, group projects and language clubs help me improve my speaking and build confidence.

제안: 表达混乱且有多处语法错误（如"A study there imposes me to new perspectives", "different a culture"）。应直接回答并给出一两个简短且具体的理由或建议。如果不想改变，也可提到仍希望改进的小方面。

예시: I don't think major changes are necessary; BISU suits me well. However, I would appreciate more international exchange events so I can get even more speaking practice with students from other cultures.

제안: 回答目标明确但语言不够自然（"determine to be"、"top employee in the foreign company"）。建议用更自然的表达说明职业目标，并具体说明将采取的学习措施（如实习、参加课程）。保持逻辑连接词。

예시: My plan is to continue improving my Business English and gain practical experience through internships. I hope to work for an international company, so I'll focus on refining my communication skills and learning industry-specific vocabulary.

× I'm a student studying at BISU and my major is Business English which can improve my English and the business negotiate skills?

✓ I'm a student studying at BISU and my major is Business English, which can improve my English and my business negotiation skills.

问题类型：句子结构和词序问题（与清单项26/13/11相关）。原句中“the business negotiate skills”词序和词类不正确，应该使用名词短语“business negotiation skills”，并在“Business English”后加非限制性定语从句逗号。建议用“my”明确所有格。

× I'm studying as BISU, a good university where I can practice a presentation and the group discussions.

✓ I'm studying at BISU, a good university where I can practice presentations and group discussions.

问题类型：介词使用和名词形式（清单项11、1）。应使用介词“at”表示就读于某校；“a presentation”与泛指活动不搭配时改为复数“presentations”；“the group discussions”应为泛指复数“group discussions”。

× Uh, I can practice my English with people from different backgrounds, which rarely improve my communication skills and help me build confidence.

✓ I can practice my English with people from different backgrounds, which often improves my communication skills and helps me build confidence.

问题类型：主谓一致与副词使用（清单项27/20）。从句“which ...”指代单数情况（practice）或整体，应使用单数动词形式“improves”和“helps”。此外原句中“rarely”与语境不符，改为“often”。

× It's an excellent place to study because I can practice my English with people from different backgrounds, which can helps me build confidence and improve my English.

✓ It's an excellent place to study because I can practice my English with people from different backgrounds, which can help me build confidence and improve my English.

问题类型：第三人称单数（清单项2）。助动词“can”后应接动词原形，不能加第三人称单数-s，故“helps”改为“help”。

× No BISU is good enough for me. A study there imposes me to new perspectives.

✓ No, BISU is good enough for me. Studying there exposes me to new perspectives.

问题类型：句子结构与动词形式（清单项26/8/11）。原句“A study there imposes me to new perspectives”结构不自然，“study”需改为动名词“Studying”，动词“impose”用法不当，改为“expose sb to sth”。同时在“No”后加逗号。

× I can practice my English with people from different a culture and backgrounds, which helps me improve my in communication and build confidence.

✓ I can practice my English with people from different cultures and backgrounds, which helps me improve my communication and build confidence.

问题类型：形容词/名词使用和介词（清单项13、11）。“different a culture”顺序和冠词错误，改为复数“different cultures”；“improve my in communication”多余介词“in”，应为“improve my communication”。

× To be honest, my major is Business English. I determine to be one of the top employee in the foreign company.

✓ To be honest, my major is Business English. I am determined to be one of the top employees in a foreign company.

问题类型：句子结构、形态和冠词（清单项26/5/22）。“determine”用法错误，应使用被动形“am determined”或短语“determine to do”但需自反；“top employee”需复数“employees”；“the foreign company”不定冠词更合适，改为“a foreign company”。

× So I need to improve my business English basic knowledge and enhance my English communication.

✓ So I need to improve my basic business English knowledge and enhance my English communication skills.

问题类型：形容词顺序与词语搭配（清单项18/13）。形容词顺序应为“basic business English knowledge”或“basic knowledge of business English”；同时“communication”在此需加“skills”以表达能力。