Opportunities— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答结构清晰，也直接回答了问题，并提供了具体活动作为例子。不过，“helped me more outgoing”语法不正确，应改为“helped me become more outgoing”或“made me more outgoing”。可以进一步说明游泳俱乐部如何帮助你变得更外向，例如参加比赛、与同学合作或结交新朋友。

예시: Yes, my primary school offered lots of clubs, so I had plenty of opportunities to try new activities. I joined the swimming club, and it helped me become more outgoing because I had to practise with my classmates and take part in small competitions. I also made several close friends there.

제안: 回答直接表达了观点，并给出了两个理由，但“people people”是重复错误。建议在句首加上逗号或使用“Absolutely, I think...”，并通过具体例子解释尝试新事物如何培养创造力或学习技能。还可以避免“new and different things”的重复表达，改为“a variety of activities”。

예시: Yes, absolutely. I think people should try a variety of activities because this can help them stay creative and develop useful skills. For example, learning a musical instrument may improve their patience and concentration, while joining a sports team can teach them how to cooperate with others.

× I joined a swimming club which helped me more outgoing.

✓ I joined a swimming club which helped me become more outgoing.

“help”后面通常接“宾语 + 动词原形”，表示帮助某人做某事。这里应使用“helped me become”，不能直接说“helped me more outgoing”。“become more outgoing”表示“变得更加外向”。建议记住结构：help + 人 + 动词原形。

× Yes, absolutely trying new and different things can help people people stay creative and learn more skills.

✓ Yes, absolutely. Trying new and different things can help people stay creative and learn more skills.

“people people”中重复使用了同一个名词，应删除一个“people”。另外，“absolutely”后面用句号可以使表达更清晰；后面的“Trying new and different things”是动名词短语，作主语。建议检查句子中是否有重复单词，并注意较长句子的标点和结构。