Opportunities— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答只是重复了考官的问题，没有直接回答“小时候是否有机会参加新活动”。应先明确回答“Yes”或“No”，然后补充具体活动、参加时间以及原因或感受。建议使用“Firstly/For example/Because”等连接词，并控制在2至4句话内。

예시: Yes, I did. When I was about eight, I joined a swimming class at a local sports centre. At first, I was nervous, but I gradually became more confident and really enjoyed it.

제안: 你的回答重复了考官的问题，没有表达自己的观点。应先直接说明是否同意，再给出一个理由和具体例子，同时可以补充适度限制，例如要根据时间、兴趣和能力选择活动。

예시: Yes, I think people should try a variety of activities because this helps them discover their interests and develop new skills. For example, someone who tries cooking, photography, and sports may find a hobby they truly enjoy. However, they should not take on so many activities that they feel overwhelmed.