Opportunities— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: You repeated the examiner’s question instead of answering it. Respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details, such as the activity, when you did it, and how you felt about it. Use natural grammar, including the plural form “opportunities” when appropriate.

예시: Yes, I had several opportunities to try new activities as a child. For example, I joined a swimming club when I was eight, and I really enjoyed learning new skills and meeting other children.

제안: You repeated the question rather than expressing your opinion. Begin with a direct answer, such as “Yes, I think they should,” and support it with a reason and a specific example. Use a linking word such as “because,” “however,” or “for example” to make your response coherent, and keep it within two to four sentences.

예시: Yes, I think people should try a variety of activities because this helps them discover their interests and develop new skills. For example, someone who tries sports, music, and volunteering may find a talent or passion they did not know they had.