Opportunities— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答直接提到了童年参加活动的机会，但存在明显的语法和搭配问题。首先，“lived in school”容易被理解为“住在学校里”，如果你想表达经常待在学校，可以说“spent a lot of time at my father’s school”。其次，要保持时态一致，将“is”改为“was”，“have”改为“had”。“play play”是重复错误；“his colleague and his students”应改为复数“his colleagues and their students”。建议先直接回答“Yes, I did”，然后说明原因，并具体列举活动及参加活动带来的结果。

예시: Yes, I did. My father was a teacher, so I spent a lot of time at his school and often joined his colleagues and students in different activities. For example, I played football, basketball and table tennis with them. It was a great way to make friends and stay active.

제안: 回答表达了赞同的观点，但后半部分不够清晰，存在词语误用和句子结构问题。“expand our boundaries”不如“step outside our comfort zone”自然；“like be strong”应改为“such as becoming more confident or physically stronger”；“take advantage”通常需要接“of something”，不能单独使用；“any sports box”意思不明确，可能想表达“different kinds of sports”。建议使用清晰的结构：观点 + 原因 + 具体例子 + 结果，并用“for example”“as a result”等连接词组织内容。

예시: Yes, I think people should try a variety of activities because it helps them step outside their comfort zones. For example, someone who tries a new sport may become healthier and more confident. They might also discover a skill or hobby they really enjoy. However, they should choose activities that suit their interests rather than trying everything randomly.

× When I was a child, I lived in school because my father is a teacher and I have so many opportunities to play play football, basketball and ping pong with his colleague and his students.

✓ When I was a child, I lived in school because my father was a teacher, and I had many opportunities to play football, basketball, and ping-pong with his colleague and his students.

句子描述的是过去的童年经历，所以应使用过去时。将 is 改为 was，将 have 改为 had。play play 中的 play 是重复使用，删除一个即可。

× Yes, I think so because we can try many things to expand our boundaries like be strong or take advantage like any sports box.

✓ Yes, I think so because we can try many things to expand our boundaries, such as becoming stronger or taking advantage of opportunities to try different sports.

such as 后面通常接名词或动名词，因此 be 应改为 becoming，take 应改为 taking。使用 becoming stronger 和 taking advantage of opportunities to try different sports，结构更加正确、清晰。

× Yes, I think so because we can try many things to expand our boundaries like be strong or take advantage like any sports box.

✓ Yes, I think so because we can try many things to expand our boundaries, such as becoming stronger or taking advantage of opportunities to try different sports.

原句中 like be strong、take advantage like any sports box 的搭配和句子结构不完整，读者不清楚具体想表达什么。表示举例时，可以使用 such as，后面接 becoming stronger 和 taking advantage of opportunities to try different sports。建议使用“such as + 动名词或名词”来列举具体例子。