Opportunities— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời có ý trả lời trực tiếp và đưa ra một số hoạt động cụ thể, nhưng có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên. Hãy dùng thì quá khứ nhất quán: “Yes, I did” thay vì “Yes, I have”, và “I had a lot of activities” thay vì “I had lot of activity”. Cần tránh lặp hoặc sửa câu giữa chừng như “I used I played”; có thể nói “I played”. Ngoài ra, “Subject hide and seek in football” không rõ nghĩa; nên nêu rõ một vài trò chơi, chẳng hạn như “hide-and-seek and football”, đồng thời dùng từ nối như “For example” để liên kết ý. Câu trả lời nên có khoảng 3 câu rõ ràng, tối đa 5 câu.

예시: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I played different games and took part in outdoor activities with my friends, cousins, and siblings. For example, we often played hide-and-seek and football together after school.

제안: Bạn đã thể hiện quan điểm “it depends”, nhưng câu trả lời chưa có cấu trúc rõ ràng và một số ý chưa phù hợp với câu hỏi. Cần sửa “the people do it” thành “the reasons people have” hoặc “the activities they try”, “many thing” thành “many things”, và “not good for human” thành “not good for people”. Ví dụ về “medicine” và “cigarettes” chưa chính xác: thuốc có thể hữu ích khi được sử dụng đúng cách, còn thuốc lá là một sản phẩm có hại. Hãy đưa ra câu trả lời cân bằng gồm quan điểm, lý do và ví dụ, sử dụng từ nối như “However” hoặc “For example”.

예시: I think people should try different things, but they should do so carefully. New activities can help them discover their interests and develop useful skills. However, they should avoid harmful habits such as smoking and should consider the possible risks before trying something new.

× Yes, uh I have.

✓ Yes, uh, I did.

The examiner's question uses the past-tense auxiliary did: Did you have...? Therefore, the answer should also use did, not have. Use Yes, I did to answer a past-tense yes/no question.

× I had lot of activity when I was a child.

✓ I had a lot of activities when I was a child.

The quantifier lot normally requires the article a in this expression: a lot of. Use a lot of to describe a large quantity.

× I had lot of activity when I was a child.

✓ I had a lot of activities when I was a child.

The phrase a lot of refers to more than one activity in this context, so the countable noun should be plural: activities. Use the singular form activity only when referring to one activity.

× I used I played different games and tried outdoor activity with my friend, cousin and siblings.

✓ I used to play different games and try outdoor activities with my friends, cousins, and siblings.

Used to must be followed by the base form of a verb, and the original structure incorrectly combines used and played. The correct structure is used to play and try. Build the sentence with one clear subject and parallel verbs.

× I used I played different games and tried outdoor activity with my friend, cousin and siblings.

✓ I used to play different games and try outdoor activities with my friends, cousins, and siblings.

The speaker refers to more than one outdoor activity and more than one friend and cousin, so these countable nouns should be plural: activities, friends, and cousins. Use plural nouns when describing several people or things.

× Subject hide and seek in football.

✓ I played games such as hide-and-seek and football.

The original phrase is incomplete and does not contain a correctly formed main verb. A complete sentence needs a subject and a verb, such as I played. Use such as to introduce examples.

× I think it depends on the purpose and the people do it because there are many thing it's not good for human like medicine, cigarette.

✓ I think it depends on the purpose and the people who do them because there are many things that are not good for humans, such as medicine and cigarettes.

The original sentence contains several clauses that are joined without the necessary relative pronouns and clear grammatical connections. Use who to describe people and that to describe things. Organize the sentence into a clear main clause followed by connected subordinate clauses.

× I think it depends on the purpose and the people do it because there are many thing it's not good for human like medicine, cigarette.

✓ I think it depends on the purpose and the people who do them because there are many things that are not good for humans, such as medicine and cigarettes.

The pronoun it does not clearly agree with the plural noun people or the plural activities implied by the context. Use who for people and them when referring to plural activities or things. Clear pronoun reference helps the listener understand what each pronoun represents.

× I think it depends on the purpose and the people do it because there are many thing it's not good for human like medicine, cigarette.

✓ I think it depends on the purpose and the people who do them because there are many things that are not good for humans, such as medicine and cigarettes.

Many must be followed by a plural countable noun, so thing must become things. Humans and cigarettes are also plural because the sentence refers to people in general and more than one cigarette.

× I think it depends on the purpose and the people do it because there are many thing it's not good for human like medicine, cigarette.

✓ I think it depends on the purpose and the people who do them because there are many things that are not good for humans, such as medicine and cigarettes.

The subject things is plural, so the verb must be are, not is. Remember to match a plural subject with a plural verb in the present tense.