Opportunities— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答切题，并提供了具体例子，结构基本清晰。不过，“encouraged me take part”应改为“encouraged me to take part”；“after school, after school classes”存在重复，建议使用“after-school classes”。此外，可以补充参加这些活动带来的结果，例如培养了兴趣或提高了自信，使答案更加完整、自然。

예시: Yes, I did. My parents encouraged me to try new activities when I was a child. For example, I attended after-school classes in dancing and painting, which helped me develop my creativity and become more confident.

제안: 回答直接，观点和理由明确，语法整体较好。为了使表达更自然，可以将“gain new experience”改为“gain new experiences”或“gain valuable experience”，并将“find your real interests”改为“discover their true interests”，保持主语一致。建议再加入一个具体例子或结果，并使用“for example”连接，使答案更有说服力。

예시: Yes, definitely. I think people should try a variety of activities because they can gain valuable experience and discover their true interests. For example, someone who tries cooking, sports, and photography may eventually find a hobby that suits their personality and even turn it into a career.

× Yes, I did because my parents encouraged me take part in new activities when I was a child. For instance, I joined after school, after school classes to learn dancing and painting.

✓ Yes, I did because my parents encouraged me to take part in new activities when I was a child. For instance, I joined after school, after school classes to learn dancing and painting.

在“encourage + 人 + 动词”结构中，动词前必须使用不定式“to”，正确结构是“encourage someone to do something”。因此，“encouraged me take part”应改为“encouraged me to take part”。