Opportunities— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答直接回应了问题，也提到了运动、语言和乐器等具体活动，这是优点。主要问题是语法、搭配和表达重复较多：应将“my parents like to sign”改为过去时“my parents liked to sign me up for”；“get assisted to new skills”不自然，应改为“learn new skills”；“that project”不适合指代课程或活动。建议使用清晰结构：先回答“Yes”，然后列举一两个活动，最后说明这些活动带来的结果。避免重复“I have a lot of”，并使用“for example”“as a result”等连接词。

예시: Yes, I had plenty of opportunities to try new activities as a child. My parents often signed me up for sports classes, language courses, and music lessons. For example, I learned to play the piano for several years, which helped me become more disciplined and confident.

제안: 观点明确，回答了“应该尝试不同事物”，并且尝试解释原因，这是基本结构上的优点。但“even they were young or they were old”应改为“whether they are young or old”；“life is quite shared”表达不清，可能想说“life is short”；“explore myself”应改为“explore ourselves”或“discover new interests”；“experience the scenes”不符合语境，应使用“experience new things”；“make us a better life”应改为“make our lives better”。建议围绕一个清晰理由展开，例如尝试新事物能帮助人们发现兴趣、培养技能，并用一个具体例子支持观点。

예시: Yes, I think people should try a variety of activities, whether they are young or old. Trying new things can help us discover our interests and develop useful skills. For example, someone who joins a cooking class may discover a passion for food and even turn it into a career.

× Yes, when I was a kid my parents like to sign different courses for me like doing sports or like a new language also a new instrument so I have a lot of I have a lot of opportunities to get assisted to new skills and to spend a lot of time on that project.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid, my parents liked to sign me up for different courses, such as sports, a new language, or a new instrument, so I had a lot of opportunities to learn new skills and spend a lot of time on those activities.

“When I was a kid”表示过去的时间，因此后面的“like”和“have”也应该使用过去式“liked”和“had”。讲述过去经历时，要保持时态一致。

× Yes, when I was a kid my parents like to sign different courses for me like doing sports or like a new language also a new instrument so I have a lot of I have a lot of opportunities to get assisted to new skills and to spend a lot of time on that project.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid, my parents liked to sign me up for different courses, such as sports, a new language, or a new instrument, so I had a lot of opportunities to learn new skills and spend a lot of time on those activities.

表达“为某人报名课程”时，应该使用固定搭配“sign someone up for a course”，而不是“sign courses for me”。其中“for”表示报名参加某个课程。

× Yes, when I was a kid my parents like to sign different courses for me like doing sports or like a new language also a new instrument so I have a lot of I have a lot of opportunities to get assisted to new skills and to spend a lot of time on that project.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid, my parents liked to sign me up for different courses, such as sports, a new language, or a new instrument, so I had a lot of opportunities to learn new skills and spend a lot of time on those activities.

“get assisted to new skills”中的“assisted”是过去分词，但这里想表达“学习新技能”，应该使用动词“learn”。“opportunities to”后面接动词原形，因此使用“to learn”。

× In my opinion, people should try as many different things as they can, even they were young or they were old because you know life is quite shared what if we don't spend time to explore myself, we're not able to experience the scenes we've never experienced.

✓ In my opinion, people should try as many different things as they can, whether they are young or old, because life is quite short. If we don't spend time exploring new things, we won't be able to experience things we've never experienced before.

“even they were young or old”缺少正确的连词。表达“无论年轻还是年老”应该使用“whether...or...”。一般性观点使用现在时“are”，而不是过去时“were”。

× In my opinion, people should try as many different things as they can, even they were young or they were old because you know life is quite shared what if we don't spend time to explore myself, we're not able to experience the scenes we've never experienced.

✓ In my opinion, people should try as many different things as they can, whether they are young or old, because life is quite short. If we don't spend time exploring new things, we won't be able to experience things we've never experienced before.

这里谈论的是适用于所有人的一般情况，所以应该使用现在时“are”，而不是过去时“were”。一般事实和普遍观点通常使用一般现在时。

× In my opinion, people should try as many different things as they can, even they were young or they were old because you know life is quite shared what if we don't spend time to explore myself, we're not able to experience the scenes we've never experienced.

✓ In my opinion, people should try as many different things as they can, whether they are young or old, because life is quite short. If we don't spend time exploring new things, we won't be able to experience things we've never experienced before.

“spend time”后面通常接动名词，结构是“spend time doing something”，所以“spend time to explore”应改为“spend time exploring”。

× In my opinion, people should try as many different things as they can, even they were young or they were old because you know life is quite shared what if we don't spend time to explore myself, we're not able to experience the scenes we've never experienced.

✓ In my opinion, people should try as many different things as they can, whether they are young or old, because life is quite short. If we don't spend time exploring ourselves, we won't be able to experience things we've never experienced before.

主语是“we”，所以反身代词应该使用“ourselves”，不能使用第一人称单数反身代词“myself”。代词必须与主语在人称和数上保持一致。

× In my opinion, people should try as many different things as they can, even they were young or they were old because you know life is quite shared what if we don't spend time to explore myself, we're not able to experience the scenes we've never experienced.

✓ In my opinion, people should try as many different things as they can, whether they are young or old, because life is quite short. If we don't spend time exploring new things, we won't be able to experience things we've never experienced before.

在“if”条件句中，主句可以使用将来时来表示结果，因此“we're not able to”应改为“we won't be able to”。常见结构是“If + 一般现在时, ... will/won’t + 动词原形”。

× So trying different scenes can make us a better life.

✓ So trying different things can make our lives better.

“our”后面指的是人们的生活，通常使用复数“lives”。“make our lives better”表示“让我们的生活变得更好”，比“make us a better life”结构正确。

× So trying different scenes can make us a better life.

✓ So trying different things can make our lives better.

“make us a better life”句子结构错误。“make”表示“使某事变得……”时，可以使用“make + 宾语 + 形容词”的结构，即“make our lives better”。