Opportunities— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答有明确态度，但表达不够自然，且出现了多次自我纠正（“sorry”）和重复表达。 “I have many opportunities to plan to participate”应改为过去时“had many opportunities to take part in”；“join me”用法错误，应改为“join my classmates/friends”。建议采用“直接回答 + 具体活动 + 结果”的结构，并使用一个真实例子来支持观点，例如参加运动、音乐或社团活动。避免堆叠“active person”“do things proactively”等意思相近的表达。

예시: Yes, definitely. When I was a child, I had many opportunities to try new activities, such as basketball and drawing classes. For example, I joined a school basketball club when I was ten, which helped me become more confident and make new friends.

제안: 观点基本清楚，也使用了“because”和“if”来解释原因，但开头的“Well, alright, maybe maybe”显得犹豫且重复。“as many different things as they could do”应简化为“as many different things as they can”；“exercise themselves”不符合这里的自然表达，可以改为“develop themselves”或“improve their abilities”。另外，回答应更直接地说明“不是所有事情都要尝试”，并补充一个具体例子，使观点更完整、更有逻辑。

예시: Yes, I think people should try a variety of activities, as long as they are safe and suitable for them. Trying new things can broaden their horizons and help them discover their strengths. For instance, someone who tries volunteering may develop better communication skills and become more confident.

× I have many opportunities to plan to participate in the activities as a child.

✓ I had many opportunities to plan to participate in activities as a child.

“as a child”表示过去的时间，因此应该使用一般过去时。把现在时“have”改为过去时“had”。

× because I'm a very active person and I do things proactively

✓ because I was a very active person and I did things proactively

这部分是在描述学生小时候的情况，所以“am”和“do”应分别改为过去式“was”和“did”，与“as a child”的时间保持一致。

× I always have the chance to join me and talk or have a discussion with my groups in a new activity.

✓ I always had the chance to join them and talk or have a discussion with my groups during a new activity.

“always”描述的是童年时期的习惯或经历，应使用一般过去时，因此“have”要改为“had”。同时，“join me”中的“me”不符合语境；如果想表达加入其他人或活动，应使用“them”。

× some people should try as many different things as they could do

✓ some people should try as many different things as they can

这个问题讨论的是一般性的建议，应使用现在时情态动词“can”，而不是过去式或较不合适的“could”。固定结构是“try as many things as they can”，其中“do”应删除，因为“try”后面的宾语已经是“things”。