Opportunities— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is direct and well organized, and you give a clear reason and specific examples. However, use the past-tense form “signed me up,” and add a comma after “For example.” You could also briefly explain what you learned or enjoyed from these activities to make your answer more developed and natural.

예시: Yes, I had plenty of opportunities to try new activities as a child because my parents encouraged me to explore different interests. For example, they signed me up for piano lessons and a science club. I particularly enjoyed the science club because it allowed me to conduct simple experiments and work with other children.

제안: Your response answers the question clearly and includes a relevant reason and examples. However, “make life more feel fulling” is incorrect; say “make life more fulfilling” or “make people’s lives more enjoyable.” Improve the flow by using a more natural phrase such as “help people meet new people,” and briefly mention the benefit of gaining confidence or discovering personal strengths.

예시: Yes, I think people should try as many different activities as possible because this can help them discover new interests and talents. For example, taking a language course or joining a sports club can help people meet new friends and experience different cultures. It can also make life more fulfilling and give them greater confidence.

× For example they sign me up for piano lessons and a science club.

✓ For example they signed me up for piano lessons and a science club.

The sentence describes activities that happened during the student's childhood, so the past tense is required. The verb sign should be changed to signed.

× For example, trying a language course or a sport can open up new social circles and make life more feel fulling.

✓ For example, trying a language course or a sport can open up new social circles and make life feel more fulfilling.

After the causative verb make, use the base verb feel, not more feel. The adjective fulfilling correctly describes life, and its comparative form should be more fulfilling, not more fulling.