Opportunities— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答基本直接，但语法和表达问题较多。应将“dreams to learning”改为“dreams of learning”或“wanted to learn”，并把“fresh activities”改为更自然的“new activities”。最后一句“but not”不完整，应该明确说明结果，例如“so I didn’t have many opportunities to try them”。建议使用“because”和“so”连接原因与结果，并补充一个具体例子，如想学习的活动。

예시: No, not really. My family couldn’t afford to pay for extra activities when I was a child. I wanted to learn how to play the piano, but we had to focus on more essential expenses. As a result, I didn’t have many opportunities to try new things.

제안: 观点明确，但存在重复、停顿和句子未完成的问题。应将“all the people”改为“everyone”，将“as many different things as they can”保留一次，并把“now”改为“know”。可以用“because”或“for example”组织理由，避免重复使用“many things and understand many things”。建议用完整的因果结构说明尝试新事物如何帮助人们发现能力、建立信心。

예시: Yes, definitely. I think everyone should try different activities because this helps them discover their interests and abilities. For example, someone who tries public speaking may become more confident over time. It can also help people realize that they are capable of more than they originally thought.

× Even though I have dreams to learning some fresh activities but not.

✓ Even though I have dreams of learning some new activities, I can't because my family didn't have enough money to support me.

“dream”表示“梦想做某事”时，通常使用“dream of + 动名词（-ing）”，不能使用“dream to learning”。另外，“fresh activities”不太自然，表达“新的活动”时使用“new activities”更合适。

× Even though I have dreams to learning some fresh activities but not.

✓ Even though I wanted to learn some new activities, I couldn't because my family didn't have enough money to support me.

“even though”本身表示“虽然”，不能与“but”在同一个让步结构中同时使用。应使用“Even though ..., ...”或“..., but ...”其中一种结构。

× Even though I have dreams to learning some fresh activities but not.

✓ I wanted to learn some new activities, but I couldn't because my family didn't have enough money to support me.

原句以“but not”结尾，句子意思不完整，缺少明确的主语和谓语。应完整表达“但是我不能，因为我的家庭没有足够的钱支持我”。

× Yeah, definitely. I think all the people should try many different things as they can umm, only in this way they can now uh, many things and understand many things, umm, before they think they can't do it and.

✓ Yeah, definitely. I think people should try as many different things as they can.

“as many ... as they can”表示“尽可能多的……”。原句缺少第一个“as”，所以“many different things as they can”结构不完整。

× Yeah, definitely. I think all the people should try many different things as they can umm, only in this way they can now uh, many things and understand many things, umm, before they think they can't do it and.

✓ Yeah, definitely. I think people should try as many different things as they can. Only in this way can they know and understand many things before they decide that they can't do them.

原句包含多个不完整结构，并且以“and”结尾，导致句子没有完整结束。“Only in this way”放在句首时，后面的情态动词“can”需要放在主语“they”之前，形成倒装结构：“Only in this way can they ...”。

× Yeah, definitely. I think all the people should try many different things as they can umm, only in this way they can now uh, many things and understand many things, umm, before they think they can't do it and.

✓ Yeah, definitely. I think people should try as many different things as they can. Only in this way can they know and understand many things before they decide that they can't do them.

“many things”是复数名词，因此后面指代这些事情时应该使用复数代词“them”，不能使用单数代词“it”。所以应说“they can't do them”。