Opportunities— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答直接，结构清晰，也使用了“for example”和“And”来补充细节。为了更自然，可以把“when I was a child”改为“as a child”，避免重复使用“piano”，并保持时态一致：过去的经历用过去时，现在的兴趣可以用一般现在时。另外，可以补充一个具体结果，例如你学了多久、参加过什么活动或从中获得了什么。

예시: Yes, I had plenty of opportunities to try new activities as a child. My parents encouraged me to take piano lessons and learn how to swim. I eventually fell in love with playing the piano, and I still enjoy listening to and playing music today.

제안: 观点明确，也给出了原因，但存在语法和表达问题。“a person don't know”应改为“a person doesn't know”或直接说“people don't know”；“discover their hobby or their talent”不够自然，可以说“discover what they enjoy or what they are good at”；“be great”含义模糊，建议具体说明结果，例如建立自信、找到职业方向或发展新技能。同时可以减少“try different things”的重复，并使用更自然的连接词，如“As a result”。

예시: Yes, I think people should try a variety of activities because they may not know what they truly enjoy or what they are good at. For example, someone might try photography as a hobby and later discover a talent for it. As a result, exploring different interests can help people build confidence and find a suitable career path.

× And with their encouragement I fell in love with piano and I really love music.

✓ And with their encouragement, I fell in love with the piano, and I really love music.

表示演奏某种乐器时，乐器名称前通常要使用定冠词“the”，所以应说“play the piano”或“fall in love with the piano”。这里的“I really love music”表示学生现在仍然喜欢音乐，使用一般现在时是正确的。

× Yes, I think people should try many different things because a person don't know what they really love or what talent they may have.

✓ Yes, I think people should try many different things because a person doesn't know what they really love or what talent they may have.

“a person”是第三人称单数主语。在一般现在时中，否定助动词应使用“doesn't”，而不是“don't”。使用“doesn't”后，后面的主要动词保持原形“know”。建议先判断主语是单数还是复数，再选择“doesn't”或“don't”。