Opportunities— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答基本切题，但存在明显的时态、冠词、介词和句子结构问题，例如“when I'm child”应改为“when I was a child”，“I attend”应使用过去时“ I attended”。“in my primary school”后应直接说明活动，且“show what? Show your talents”表达不完整、不自然。建议先直接回答，再用一个具体细节说明活动的目的或结果，并使用“also”或“because”等连接词使内容更连贯。

예시: Yes, I had the opportunity to try dancing when I was a child. I attended a dance class at my primary school, where we sometimes performed to show our talents. It was exciting, and it helped me become more confident.

제안: 回答直接、观点清楚，理由也与问题相关。不过，“let people know what they really like”略显不自然，可以改为“help people find out what they enjoy”。为了提升内容的具体性，可以补充一个例子或结果，例如尝试运动、音乐或志愿活动后发现自己的兴趣。注意使用“because”或“For example”连接观点和细节。

예시: Yes, I think people should try a variety of activities because this helps them find out what they really enjoy. For example, someone might try painting, sports, or volunteering and discover a hidden talent. It can also make them more confident and open-minded.

× Yes, when I'm child I attend a dance class and my primary school we have chance to to show what? Show your talents.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I attended a dance class, and at my primary school, we had a chance to show our talents.

题目问的是童年时期的经历，因此应该使用一般过去时。应将 “am” 改为 “was”，将 “attend” 改为 “attended”，将 “have” 改为 “had”。描述过去发生的事情时，要注意谓语动词保持过去时。

× Yes, when I'm child I attend a dance class and my primary school we have chance to to show what? Show your talents.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I attended a dance class, and at my primary school, we had a chance to show our talents.

“my primary school” 前面缺少表示地点的介词，应使用 “at”，构成 “at my primary school”，意思是“在我的小学”。表示在学校、公司等地点时，通常使用介词 “at”。

× Yes, when I'm child I attend a dance class and my primary school we have chance to to show what? Show your talents.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I attended a dance class, and at my primary school, we had a chance to show our talents.

句子的主语是 “we”，所以表示所属关系时应使用对应的物主代词 “our”，而不是 “your”。主语和物主代词的人称要保持一致，例如 “we...our”。

× Yes, when I'm child I attend a dance class and my primary school we have chance to to show what? Show your talents.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I attended a dance class, and at my primary school, we had a chance to show our talents.

“child” 是可数名词单数，前面需要冠词，应说 “a child”。“dance class” 和 “chance” 也是可数名词单数，分别应说 “a dance class” 和 “a chance”。遇到可数名词单数时，通常不能直接单独使用名词。