Opportunities— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答直接，但存在明显的语法、搭配和表达问题。首先，应该说“my parents were very strict with me”，而不是“strict to me”；描述过去的要求时，应使用“had to study”，而不是“I have to study”。其次，“so many time”应改为“so much time”。另外，原答案把多个分句连接在一起，缺少清晰的停顿和连接词。建议使用“because”说明原因，再用“as a result”补充结果，并加入一个具体活动作为例子，使答案更自然、更有细节。

예시: No, I didn’t have many opportunities to try new activities as a child. My parents were quite strict with me, so I had to spend most of my time studying. As a result, I rarely had time for hobbies or activities like sports and painting.

제안: 回答表达了明确观点，但句子结构混乱，两个“because”重复使用，导致逻辑不清。“we only live once”后面应使用连接词，例如“so”；“do as much as we can do”不自然，可以改为“try different experiences”。此外，“everything we do is related to other things and improve ourselves”存在主谓一致和搭配问题，应改为“these experiences can help us improve ourselves”。建议按照“观点—原因—具体结果”的结构回答，并加入一个例子。

예시: Yes, I think people should try a variety of activities whenever possible. We only live once, and new experiences can help us discover our interests and develop useful skills. For example, someone who tries volunteering may become more confident and learn how to communicate with different people.

× My parents were very strict to me.

✓ My parents were very strict with me.

表示“对某人严格”时，strict通常与介词with搭配，而不是to。建议记住固定搭配：be strict with somebody。

× I have to study all day.

✓ I had to study all day.

整段内容讲的是童年时期的经历，属于过去时间，因此要使用过去时。have to的过去式是had to。

× I didn't have so many time to do other things.

✓ I didn't have so much time to do other things.

time表示“时间”时通常是不可数名词，不能用many修饰，应使用much。many修饰可数名词复数，例如many activities；much修饰不可数名词，例如much time。

× No, I didn't have any opportunities to take part in new activities because when I was a child my parents were very strict to me I have to study all day so I didn't have so many time to do other things.

✓ No, I didn't have any opportunities to take part in new activities. When I was a child, my parents were very strict with me, so I had to study all day. As a result, I didn't have much time to do other things.

原句包含多个完整意思，但没有用句号或恰当的连接方式分开，造成句子过长、结构混乱。建议把复杂回答拆成两到三个短句，并使用so或as a result表示因果关系。

× Everything we do is related to other things and improve ourselves.

✓ Everything we do is related to other things and helps us improve ourselves.

主语everything是单数，所以后面的谓语要使用第三人称单数形式。原句中的improve与主语不一致；另外，helps us improve ourselves更清楚地表达“帮助我们提升自己”。

× Yes, I think so because we only live once we can do as much as we can do because everything we do is related to other things and improve ourselves.

✓ Yes, I think so because we only live once. We can do as much as we can because everything we do is related to other things and helps us improve ourselves.

原句连续使用多个because，并把多个完整分句直接连接在一起，导致句子结构不清晰。建议拆分句子，并避免重复使用相同结构。