Opportunities— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答基本切题，也提到了具体活动（下棋），但存在较多语法和搭配问题。应说“as a child”而不是“as my child”，“had an opportunity”需要冠词；“seized it from my teachers”表达不自然，可以改为“my teacher gave me the opportunity”或“I took the opportunity”。此外，“a competition to others”应改为“compete with other students”。建议先直接回答，再用原因或结果补充，控制在2—4句，并使用“because”“as a result”等连接词。

예시: Yes, I did. When I was about eight, my teacher gave me the opportunity to join a chess club at school. I really enjoyed competing with other students because it helped me become more patient and strategic.

제안: 回答表达了“应该尝试新事物”的观点，但第二句的逻辑和词汇不清楚。“in their child”应改为“during childhood”或“when they are young”；“newer activities”应改为“different activities”；“chase the powers”不是自然表达，可以说“they may have fewer opportunities”或“they may lack the time and energy”。建议使用清晰的结构：观点 + 原因 + 具体结果或例子，并避免把“过去的活动”误解为“old activities”。

예시: Yes, I think people should try a variety of activities, especially when they are young. This allows them to discover their interests and develop different skills. For example, trying sports, music, or cooking can help them become more confident and adaptable.

× Yes, I had opportunity to take part in new activities as my child.

✓ Yes, I had an opportunity to take part in new activities as a child.

“Opportunity”是可数名词，单数形式前需要使用冠词“an”。“As a child”表示“小时候”，这里使用单数“child”是固定表达。

× Yes, I had opportunity to take part in new activities as my child.

✓ Yes, I had an opportunity to take part in new activities as a child.

“Opportunity”是单数可数名词，前面必须加冠词。因为“opportunity”以元音音素开头，所以使用“an”，而不是“a”。

× Yes, I had opportunity to take part in new activities as my child.

✓ Yes, I had an opportunity to take part in new activities as a child.

表达“小时候”时，应使用固定搭配“as a child”，而不是“as my child”。“My child”表示“我的孩子”，意思不符合语境。

× I seized it from my teachers to join a new class of chess.

✓ I seized the opportunity offered by my teachers to join a new chess class.

“From my teachers”不能准确表达“老师提供了这个机会”。这里使用“offered by my teachers”更合适，表示“由老师提供的”。“Chess class”是正确的名词组合。

× That is a great chance to have a competition to others.

✓ That was a great chance to have a competition with others.

前文讲述的是童年时期的经历，因此应使用过去时“was”，而不是现在时“is”。

× That is a great chance to have a competition to others.

✓ That was a great chance to have a competition with others.

“Competition”表示“和别人进行竞争”时，通常搭配介词“with”，而不是“to”。

× Yes, people should try newer activities in their child.

✓ Yes, people should try new activities during childhood.

“Newer”是比较级，通常需要明确的比较对象。这里是在泛指新活动，不是在比较两个活动，因此应使用原级“new”。

× Yes, people should try newer activities in their child.

✓ Yes, people should try new activities during childhood.

“In their child”不是表示“在童年时期”的正确表达。这里使用“during childhood”，意思是“在童年时期”，更加准确。

× If the time has gone, they couldn't chase the powers to join the old activities.

✓ If time goes by, they may not be able to join these activities.

在表达一般条件时，if从句通常使用一般现在时，因此应使用“goes by”，而不是现在完成时“has gone”。

× If the time has gone, they couldn't chase the powers to join the old activities.

✓ If time goes by, they may not be able to join these activities.

“Couldn’t”表示过去不能或没有能力，不适合表达这里的一般可能性。应使用“may not be able to”，表示“可能无法”。