Opportunities— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly with a complete sentence and use the correct past tense. Explain what you were busy with and, if possible, mention one specific activity you did not have the opportunity to try. Avoid repeating “no” and do not leave the sentence unfinished.

예시: No, I didn’t have many opportunities to try new activities because I was busy with my schoolwork. For example, I wanted to learn how to play the guitar, but I didn’t have enough free time. As a result, I usually stayed at home and studied.

제안: Give a clear opinion in the first sentence and support it with a logical reason and a specific example. Use accurate vocabulary and grammar instead of disconnected words such as “help,” “health,” and “many things.” Linking words such as “because,” “for example,” and “as a result” will make your answer more coherent.

예시: Yes, I think people should try different activities whenever possible because this helps them discover their interests and develop new skills. For example, someone might try cooking, sports, or volunteering and find a talent they did not know they had. It can also make life more interesting and enjoyable.

× No, no because I did not any activity because I am busy with my

✓ No, because I did not take part in any activities. I was busy with my studies.

The original sentence is incomplete because did not must be followed by a base-form verb. The phrase busy with my is also unfinished and needs a noun, such as studies. The answer is divided into two complete sentences to make the structure clear.

× No, no because I did not any activity because I am busy with my

✓ No, because I did not take part in any activities. I was busy with my studies.

When referring generally to different activities, the plural noun activities is more appropriate after any. Using activities also fits the question, which asks about opportunities to take part in new activities.

× No, no because I did not any activity because I am busy with my

✓ No, because I did not take part in any activities. I was busy with my studies.

The question asks about the student’s childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Am must be changed to was. Also, did not is correctly followed by the base verb take.

× Yes, many people help Should Health So many things.

✓ Yes, people should try as many different things as they can.

The modal verb should must come before the base-form verb: should try. The original word order is incorrect, and should not be followed by a past-tense or third-person verb form.

× Yes, many people help Should Health So many things.

✓ Yes, people should try as many different things as they can.

The original sentence does not form a clear grammatical structure because the words are in the wrong order and some words do not fit the intended meaning. A complete structure is subject + modal verb + base verb: people should try.