Opportunities— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ неясен и содержит грамматические ошибки. Нужно: 1) Чётко ответить на вопрос в первом предложении (например: “No, I didn’t.” или “Yes, I did.”). 2) Использовать правильное время — прошедшее (did/didn't, had/hadn't). 3) Избежать неясных фраз и исправить слова (например, “I had siblings” вместо “I sha kids” если имелось в виду «у меня были дети» или «братья/сестры»). 4) Добавить одно-два конкретных дополнительный факта (какие занятия, почему не участвовали или как это повлияло). 5) Не больше 3–4 предложений, использовать связку для логики (because, so, but). Примерный план: краткий ответ + причина + пример.

예시: No, I didn’t have many opportunities to try new activities as a child. I grew up in a small town and there were few clubs or classes available. Because of that, I mostly stayed at home and played with my siblings instead of joining organized games.

제안: Хорошая идея в ответе, но нужно улучшить грамматику, связность и конкретику. Рекомендации: 1) Начинать с прямого мнения: “Yes, they should.” 2) Использовать связующие слова для объяснения (because, for example, this helps). 3) Закончить мысль — объяснить, что именно можно найти (новые хобби, карьерный путь и т.д.). 4) Использовать полные предложения и избегать междометий («ah»). 5) Привести короткий конкретный пример или результат. Не больше 3 предложений.

예시: Yes, people should try as many different things as possible because it helps them discover new interests and skills. For example, trying a language course or a sport might lead to a lifelong hobby or even a new career. Therefore, being open to new experiences can be very rewarding.

× No I don't I haven't opportunities to take part in your activities as a child because I sha kids and I don't like games.

✓ No, I didn't. I didn't have opportunities to take part in any activities as a child because I had to look after my kids and I didn't like games.

The student mixed present and past tenses and used incorrect pronouns. Use past tense 'didn't' and 'didn't have' to match 'as a child' (past). Replace 'I haven't opportunities' with 'I didn't have opportunities' (incorrect verb form and article). 'your activities' is incorrect; use 'any activities' or 'activities' (wrong pronoun). 'I sha kids' is likely 'I had to look after my kids' (missing words). Suggestion: keep consistent past tense for past events, use 'have' correctly with 'did' (did not have), and use appropriate phrases for caregiving ('had to look after').

× I think people should try as many different things because it's very interesting and person maybe ah found a new

✓ I think people should try as many different things as possible because it's very interesting and a person might find something new.

The sentence has modal and sentence-structure issues. Use 'should' correctly for advice and 'might' (or 'may') for possibility rather than 'maybe' in that position. Add 'as possible' to complete the idea. Use 'a person' before 'might' and 'find something new' to finish the thought. Suggestion: use 'might' for hypothetical outcomes and complete clauses so they are grammatically full (subject + modal + verb + object).