Opportunities— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Speak in complete, grammatically correct sentences and be specific. Begin with a clear topic sentence that answers the question, then give one or two supporting details using linking words. Correct verb tenses (use past for childhood) and avoid redundancy. For example, say when and what kinds of activities you tried and why those opportunities changed.

예시: Yes. When I was a child, I had many opportunities to try new activities, such as joining the school choir and taking swimming lessons. For example, I learned to swim at age seven through a community program, and being part of the choir helped me become more confident when speaking in front of people.

제안: Answer directly with a clear opinion and then support it with specific reasons and examples using linking words (because, for example, however). Avoid listing irrelevant personal examples that confuse the point. Use correct grammar and plural/singular forms.

예시: Yes, I think people should try many different things because it helps them discover new interests and develop skills. For example, some of my friends play cricket and improve their teamwork, while my cousins prefer video games like PUBG on weekends; both activities teach different skills, such as coordination or strategic thinking.

× When I was child I have I had a lot of opportunity, but now I have no any opportunity to get any kind of activity.

✓ When I was a child I had a lot of opportunities, but now I have no opportunity to take part in any activities.

Multiple problems: missing article 'a' before 'child' (article error, ID 22), incorrect present perfect 'have' used with past timeframe (tense error, ID 5), extra 'I have' fragment (sentence structure error, ID 26), singular 'opportunity' should be plural 'opportunities' to match 'a lot of' (singular/plural issue, ID 1), 'no any' is ungrammatical (quantifier/article error, ID 14/22), and 'to get any kind of activity' is awkward and ungrammatical—use 'take part in any activities' (preposition and noun choice, ID 11). Correction uses simple past 'had' to match 'When I was a child', adds article, pluralizes 'opportunities', removes redundant words, and uses the correct verb phrase 'take part in' for activities.

× Yes, lot of people do many activity like my friends play games like cricket but my cousins are not play cricket.

✓ Yes, a lot of people do many activities; for example, my friends play games like cricket, but my cousins do not play cricket.

Errors: missing article 'a' before 'lot' (article error, ID 22), 'many activity' should be plural 'many activities' (singular/plural issue, ID 1), run-on sentence and missing connectors causing sentence structure errors (ID 26), incorrect negative 'are not play' instead of 'do not play' (verb tense/auxiliary and subject-verb agreement, IDs 6 and 27). The correction adds the article, pluralizes 'activity', separates ideas with punctuation and a connector, and uses the correct auxiliary 'do' for the present simple negative 'do not play'.

× They will play PUBG in the weekend.

✓ They play PUBG at the weekend.

This sentence uses 'will play' which implies a future plan; context describes habitual weekend activity so present simple 'play' is appropriate (present tense issue, ID 6). Also use the preposition 'at the weekend' (or 'on weekends') rather than 'in the weekend' (preposition error, ID 11). Correction uses present simple for habitual action and correct preposition.