Opportunities— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a direct but fuller response: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details (what activities, when, or who encouraged you) using a linking word to connect ideas. Keep it concise (no more than 4–5 sentences) and use varied vocabulary (e.g. participated, tried out, organized).

예시: Yes, I did. When I was a child I had the chance to try several activities, such as piano lessons and football at school, because my parents encouraged me to join local clubs. As a result, I discovered I enjoyed music more than sports and kept taking piano lessons for several years.

제안: Answer directly then support your opinion with a reason and an example. Use a linking word (for example, because, therefore) to make your idea coherent. Include a short consequence or personal opinion to make the answer specific and natural.

예시: Yes, absolutely, people should try many different things because it helps them discover their strengths and interests. For example, trying different hobbies or subjects at school can reveal a talent you didn’t expect, and therefore make it easier to choose a career path later.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question 'Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?' is in the past simple (Did ... as a child). The response 'Yes, I have.' uses present perfect, which mismatches the past time reference. Use past simple 'Yes, I did.' to match the tense and time frame. Suggestion: respond in the same past tense as the question when a specific past period is indicated.

× Yes, absolutely.

✓ Yes, absolutely.

The sentence 'Yes, absolutely.' is a short, grammatically correct affirmative response to 'Should people try as many different things as they can?' No grammatical change is necessary. Marked here to indicate no correction required; it correctly uses present modal sense (should) and the short answer affirms that modal recommendation.