Opportunities— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. To improve, answer directly with a clear topic sentence, give one or two specific supporting details, and keep the response concise (no more than 5 sentences). Use linking words (e.g., "for example", "also", "because") if you add details.

예시: Yes, I had several chances to try new activities as a child. For example, my parents encouraged me to join a local football club and an after-school painting class, which helped me develop teamwork and creativity. I also tried music lessons for a year because I wanted to learn the piano, though I eventually stopped due to lack of practice.

제안: Again, you repeated the examiner's question instead of giving your opinion. To improve, state your view clearly (agree/disagree), then support it with reasons and a brief example. Keep answers natural and avoid redundancy.

예시: Yes, I think people should try as many different things as they can because it helps them discover interests and build skills. For instance, trying different hobbies like cooking or coding can reveal a talent you never expected and make you more adaptable in life.

× Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activity as a child?

✓ Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?

The noun 'activity' should be plural 'activities' because 'any opportunities' implies more than one potential activity. Use plural to match the quantifier and to sound natural. Suggestion: match count words (any, many, several) with plural nouns.

× Should people try as many different things as they can?

✓ Should people try as many different things as they can?

This sentence is grammatically correct. It correctly uses plural 'things' with 'as many', proper modal verb 'should', and appropriate word order. No change needed.