Opportunities— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, use past tense for childhood, and provide 1–2 specific supporting details linked logically. Keep it concise (max 5 sentences) and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes. I had many opportunities to try new activities as a child in India. For example, I joined a traditional dance class when I was eight and learned swimming at age ten. These experiences helped me become more confident and curious about learning new skills.

제안: Give a clear opinion and support it with reasons using linking words. Avoid rhetorical overstatement and ask-back phrasing. State your view, then give 1–2 concise reasons or an example.

예시: Yes, I think people should try a variety of things. Trying new activities broadens your skills and helps you discover interests; for instance, I experimented with painting and coding, which improved my creativity and problem-solving.

× Yes, I take participate in new activities as a child and many times in India.

✓ Yes, I took part in many new activities when I was a child in India.

Issues: incorrect verb form and structure. 'take participate' is ungrammatical — correct collocation is 'take part' or 'participate in', and because the question asks about the past, the past tense 'took' (or 'participated') should be used. Also 'as a child' should be expressed as 'when I was a child' and 'many times in India' is more naturally 'many new activities when I was a child in India' or 'many times while I was in India'. Suggestion: use a single correct verb collocation (either 'took part in' or 'participated in') and match tense to the question.

× Yes. Should people try as many different things every day, every time, every minute, every second?

✓ Yes. People should try as many different things as they can, but not literally every minute or every second.

Issues: sentence is awkwardly formed as a question repeating 'Should' after the examiner's question and exaggerates frequency with 'every minute, every second', which is unnatural. The intended response is an affirmative statement using modal verb 'should' in a declarative form: 'People should...' Keep frequency expressions realistic. Suggestion: answer directly with a declarative statement and avoid redundant question format and hyperbolic time phrases.