Opportunities— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Старайтесь отвечать прямо и грамматически корректно: начните с чёткой темы, затем добавьте короткую деталь. Избегайте лишних заполнителей (например, «uh») и неверного порядка слов. Также используйте правильные артикли и формы слов (например, «those opportunities» или «many opportunities»). Если не помните, можно сказать, что вы не уверены, но добавить общее воспоминание или пример.

예시: To be honest, I don't remember many specific opportunities I had as a child. However, I vaguely recall trying a few activities like swimming lessons and a summer art class, which helped me be more confident.

제안: Говорите коротко и логично: начните с прямого утверждения, затем приведите 1–2 конкретные причины или примера, используя связки (for example, because, therefore). Избегайте лишних слов и ошибок в структуре (уберите «to» после should, исправьте «it is can to give»). Заканчивайте предложением, которое завершает мысль.

예시: Yes, I think people should try as many different things as possible because it helps them discover new interests and skills. For example, learning a musical instrument or volunteering can open career opportunities and boost confidence.

× To be honest, I don't remember, uh, that opportunities I had when I was a child.

✓ To be honest, I don't remember the opportunities I had when I was a child.

The word 'that' is incorrectly used as a determiner before 'opportunities'. Use the definite article 'the' to refer to specific opportunities from the past. Also remove filler 'uh' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'the opportunities I had' to clearly reference past experiences. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× Personally, I think that people should to try as many different things as they can because it's really useful and, uh, it is can to give, uh, a lot of opportunities for the.

✓ Personally, I think that people should try as many different things as they can because it's really useful and it can give a lot of opportunities.

There are several modal and auxiliary verb errors: 'should to try' is incorrect because modal verbs (should) are followed by the base verb without 'to' — use 'should try'. The phrase 'it is can to give' mixes auxiliaries incorrectly; use 'it can give' or 'it is capable of giving'. Also remove the trailing preposition 'for the' and replace with a concise noun phrase 'a lot of opportunities'. Suggestions: after a modal verb use base verb; use one auxiliary at a time; finish the sentence with a clear object. Grammar problem type ID: 4