Opportunities— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 句子有语法和时态错误，表达也有些重复。建议使用正确的过去时，简洁回答并用一两句具体细节支持，例如说明参加了哪些户外活动和感受。注意连接词的使用，使句子更连贯。具体改进点：1) 将现在时“have”改为过去时“had”；2) 删除冗余词汇（如“very not very”）；3) 用一到两个连接词（because, so, and）来组织原因和结果；4) 提供具体活动名称和一两句话描述体验。

예시: Yes, I did. I had many chances to try new activities as a child, especially outdoor ones like cycling and hiking, because schoolwork was lighter then. As a result, I spent a lot of time exploring nature and learning practical skills such as map-reading and teamwork.

제안: 回答过于简短且包含语法错误与口语填充词（如重复的“yes”）。建议先给出清晰的主题句，然后用一到两句具体理由或例子支持观点，避免重复。注意主谓一致（“give”应为“gives”）和词汇准确性（“special experience for their life”可改为“valuable experiences in life”）。

예시: Yes, I believe people should try as many things as possible because new experiences help you grow and discover your interests. For example, trying different sports or hobbies can teach you new skills and help you meet people with similar passions.

× When I was a child, I have many opportunities to take part in new activities, especially for the outdoor activities Since at that time, the study pressure is very not very high, so we have plenty of time to engage in outdoor activities.

✓ When I was a child, I had many opportunities to take part in new activities, especially outdoor activities. Since at that time, the study pressure was not very high, we had plenty of time to engage in outdoor activities.

问题类型（6）：现在时使用错误。原句将过去时背景（When I was a child）与现在时态（have / is）混用，导致时态不一致。应把句子统一为过去时：'have' → 'had'，'is not very high' → 'was not very high'；另外删去多余的定冠词和修正词序（'especially for the outdoor activities' → 'especially outdoor activities'）。建议：在叙述过去事件时，整个句子都使用过去时，注意不要混入现在时的动词形式。

× Yes, sure. I think people should take every chance to try new activities because that's what give them a special experience for their life, yes.

✓ Yes, sure. I think people should take every chance to try new activities because that's what gives them a special experience in their life.

问题类型（6）：现在时使用/主谓一致问题。句中先使用现在时态（think, should），随后子句中用 'give' 与先行词 'that' 或 'what' 的单数含义不一致，应使用第三人称单数形式 'gives'。同时 'for their life' 用法不自然，改为 'in their life' 更通顺。建议：复查主句和从句的时态及主谓一致，'what' 引导的内容视为单数时动词用第三人称单数形式。