Tiredness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答切题，也说明了疲惫出现的场景和感受。注意主谓一致和时态统一：应说“who gets tired”，描述习惯时用“usually feel”，不要在同一句中混用过去时和现在时。另外，“go to bed”比“go to my bed”自然；可以用一个连接词让原因和结果更清楚。

예시: Yes, I get tired quite easily. After a full day of classes, I usually feel so exhausted that I don't have much energy left. I just want to go to bed and relax.

제안: 你给出了上课和长时间社交这两个具体情境，内容充分。建议用“especially”或“also”连接两个情况，并避免重复使用“also”和“feel tired”。可以把较长的句子拆成两句，让表达更清晰自然。

예시: I usually feel tired after several classes, especially if I've had to concentrate for hours. I also get drained when I socialise for a long time, so I may not feel like talking to anyone afterwards.

제안: 回答直接，但“working along the street”不符合这里想表达的意思；如果你指的是散步，应说“walking along the street”或“going for a walk”。此外，休息和运动看起来有些矛盾，可以补充说明轻度散步能让你放松，并用连接词衔接。

예시: I usually lie down and rest for a while when I'm tired. If I need to clear my head, I sometimes go for a gentle walk near my home. It helps me relax without using too much energy.

제안: 你明确回答了问题，也给出了在家休息的例子。注意句首“Actually, no”后可用句号，避免整句过长；“watching movie alone”应改为“watching a movie alone”或“watching movies by myself”。还可以补充一句说明疲惫时不想出门的原因。

예시: Actually, no. When I'm tired, I'd rather stay at home and relax because I don't have much energy to socialise. I might watch a movie by myself and go to bed early.

× Yes, I'm the kind of person who very easily get tired and after a whole school day I usually felt so tired that I can't do anything else. I just want to go to my bed and take a rest.

✓ Yes, I'm the kind of person who gets tired very easily and after a whole school day I usually felt so tired that I can't do anything else. I just want to go to my bed and take a rest.

关系代词 who 指代单数的 person，因此一般现在时的谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式 gets，而不是 get。

× Yes, I'm the kind of person who very easily get tired and after a whole school day I usually felt so tired that I can't do anything else. I just want to go to my bed and take a rest.

✓ Yes, I'm the kind of person who very easily get tired and after a whole school day I usually feel so tired that I can't do anything else. I just want to go to my bed and take a rest.

这句话描述的是通常发生的情况，应使用一般现在时。felt 是一般过去时，应改为 feel。

× Usually after taking many classes I feel tired also if I have to socialise with other people for a very long time I also feel tired and don't want to talk to anyone else.

✓ Usually, I feel tired after taking many classes. I also feel tired if I have to socialise with other people for a very long time, and I don't want to talk to anyone else.

原句将多个完整意思直接连在一起，句子结构不清晰。可以拆成两个句子，并用逗号分隔 if 条件从句与主句，让表达更清楚。

× Actually, no, if I feel tired, I just want to stay at home and take a rest, for example, watching movie alone

✓ Actually, no. If I feel tired, I just want to stay at home and take a rest, for example, watching a movie alone.

movie 是单数可数名词，前面需要加冠词。此处可用不定冠词 a，改为 a movie。