Tiredness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答直接，原因也比较清楚，但“under too many things to do”用法不自然，应改为“have too many things to do”或“have a busy schedule”。可以加入具体活动，使答案更有内容；同时注意不要重复表达“忙碌”。

예시: Yes, I often feel tired because I have a busy schedule and too many assignments to finish. For example, I usually have classes during the day and spend several hours studying in the evening.

제안: 答案缺少完整句子，且“do much sports”不自然，应该说“do a lot of exercise”或“play sports for a long time”。建议先直接回答时间或情况，再补充一个具体原因，并使用“especially”或“when”连接信息。

예시: I usually feel tired after doing a lot of exercise or studying for several hours. I feel especially exhausted when I have to concentrate on a difficult subject for a long time.

제안: 回答结构清楚，行动和原因都有，内容符合问题。为了更自然，可以把“go to sleep for a short time”改为“take a short nap”，并在从句前加逗号；还可以说明小睡的具体时长或效果，使细节更丰富。

예시: When I feel tired, I usually take a short nap of about twenty minutes because it helps me relax and regain my energy. If I cannot sleep, I listen to some quiet music instead.

제안: 回答直接，理由合理，整体表达自然。可以将“recover my energy”改为更常见的“recharge my batteries”或“rest and regain my energy”。建议增加一个具体结果，例如第二天状态更好，但控制在两到三句话内。

예시: No, I usually stay at home when I feel tired because I need to rest and recharge my batteries. After a good night’s sleep, I normally feel refreshed and can enjoy spending time with my friends.

× When I do much sports or study for a long time

✓ When I do a lot of sports or study for a long time

“Sports”通常是不可数名词，不能用“much”来修饰表示日常活动的数量。肯定句中更自然的表达是“a lot of sports”。也可以说“play a lot of sports”。

× Yes, I often feel tired because I have a very busy schedule under too many things to do.

✓ Yes, I often feel tired because I have a very busy schedule with too many things to do.

“Under too many things to do”中的介词“under”使用不正确。这里表示“有很多事情要做”，应使用“with”。建议记住固定搭配“a schedule with many things to do”。