Tiredness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答直接，但“much things”应改为“many things”或“a lot of things”。“nowadays”在这里略显生硬，可以使用“these days”。建议补充一个具体原因或结果，例如学习任务多、睡眠不足等，使答案更具体。

예시: Yes, I often feel tired these days because I have a lot of schoolwork to deal with. I also spend long hours studying, so I don’t always get enough rest.

제안: 回答结构清晰，直接回答了问题，并使用“especially”补充了具体情况。主要问题是“sitting up late for study”不够自然，建议改为“staying up late to study”。还可以补充疲劳带来的具体感受，例如第二天注意力不集中。

예시: I usually feel tired when I don’t get enough sleep, especially after staying up late to study. The next day, I often find it difficult to concentrate in class.

제안: 回答表达了休息和睡觉的意思，但存在明显的搭配和语法问题。“watch my phone”应改为“look at my phone”或“use my phone”，“for relax”应改为“to relax”，“get asleep”应改为“fall asleep”。建议使用“first...then...”组织两个行动，并说明这样做的效果。

예시: When I feel tired, I usually take a short break and use my phone to relax. If I’m really exhausted, I put my phone away and take a short nap so that I can feel refreshed.

제안: 回答立场明确，也给出了原因。不过，“going with my friend”应改为“going out with my friends”，因为题目询问的是外出活动；“make me more tired”可以改为更自然的“make me feel even more tired”。建议补充一个具体做法或例子，并使用连接词使答案更连贯。

예시: No, I usually stay at home when I feel tired because going out with my friends would make me feel even more exhausted. Instead, I prefer to have an early night and meet them when I have more energy.

× Yes, I often feel tired because nowadays I have much things to do.

✓ Yes, I often feel tired because nowadays I have many things to do.

“Things”是可数名词的复数形式，因此不能用表示不可数名词的“much”。这里应该使用“many”，表示“许多事情”。建议记住：“much + 不可数名词”，“many + 可数名词复数”。

× Yes, I often feel tired because nowadays I have much things to do.

✓ Yes, I often feel tired because nowadays I have many things to do.

“Things”表示多个事情，所以必须使用复数形式。单数形式是“thing”，复数形式是“things”。由于前面使用了“many”，后面必须接可数名词复数。

× I usually feel tired when I don't get enough sleep, especially after sitting up late for study.

✓ I usually feel tired when I don't get enough sleep, especially after sitting up late to study.

这里表达“熬夜去学习”的目的，应该使用“to + 动词原形”，所以“for study”应改为“to study”。建议使用“to + 动词”表示目的，例如“To study English, I read every day.”

× When I feel tired I like to watch my phone for relax or get asleep

✓ When I feel tired, I like to watch my phone to relax or fall asleep.

表达“通过看手机来放松”时，应该使用“to relax”表示目的，而不能使用“for relax”。另外，“fall asleep”是更正确、自然的固定表达，表示“入睡”。

× When I feel tired I like to watch my phone for relax or get asleep

✓ When I feel tired, I like to watch my phone to relax or fall asleep.

句中的“or”用于连接两个并列的动作：“to relax”和“fall asleep”。修改后两个动作的结构更加平行、清晰。建议连接并列成分时，尽量保持它们的语法形式一致。