Tiredness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答直接，但“swarmed with work”虽然可以理解，却不如“have a heavy workload”自然；“Freed Unflitched”和“salted”明显不符合语境，可能导致表达不清。建议使用“stay up late to finish my work”和“feel exhausted the next day”。可以加入一个具体结果，使答案更完整，但控制在3—4句话内。

예시: Yes, I often do, mainly because I have a heavy workload and a lot of English study to do. I sometimes stay up late to finish my assignments, so I feel exhausted the next day. As a result, it can be difficult for me to concentrate in the morning.

제안: 答案尝试解释饭后疲劳的原因，但“runchy”“bigger round tree”等表达无法理解，严重影响准确性和连贯性。“my body focuses my stomach”也不自然，应改为“my body is busy digesting food”。建议先明确时间，再解释原因，最后给出具体例子；使用“especially”或“because”连接细节。

예시: I usually feel tired after a heavy lunch, especially when I eat too much. This is because my body is busy digesting the food, so I feel sleepy rather than focused. For example, yesterday I had no energy to study English after lunch.

제안: 回答给出了咖啡和散步两个具体方法，内容切题，但“take a short work”应为“take a short walk”，“stay in a jeticle”表达不清，“breath”作动词应为“breathe”。此外，时态不一致，建议统一使用一般现在时，并用“which helps”连接结果。

예시: When I feel tired, I usually drink a cup of coffee and take a short walk outside. The fresh air helps me feel more refreshed, and walking allows me to concentrate better. If I am extremely tired, I take a short nap instead.

제안: 回答表达了“即使累也会见朋友”的立场，并提供了缩短聚会和提前喝咖啡的细节，这是较好的结构。但“visit the appointment”“lay down”和“do it so tidal”不符合语境，重复使用“I”也影响流畅度。应明确说明是不想取消约会或待在家里，并使用“if I feel particularly tired”来引出例外情况。

예시: Yes, I sometimes still go out with my friends because I do not want to cancel our plans or stay at home all evening. However, if I feel particularly tired, I keep the meeting short. I may also drink a cup of coffee beforehand so that I can stay awake.

× I frequently stay up later to Freed Unflitched work.

✓ I frequently stay up late to finish unfinished work.

“stay up”后面通常接副词“late”，表示“熬夜到很晚”。“later”表示“更晚”，需要有比较对象。

× I frequently stay up later to Freed Unflitched work.

✓ I frequently stay up late to finish unfinished work.

“to”后面应该接动词原形，因此应使用“finish”。原句中的“Freed Unflitched”没有构成正确的动词短语。建议记住：to + 动词原形。

× I feel tired after runchy because my body focuses my stomach, not on my brain.

✓ I feel tired after lunch because my body focuses on my stomach, not on my brain.

动词“focus”表示“集中注意力于……”时，通常与介词“on”搭配，不能直接接宾语。应说“focuses on my stomach”。

× When I feel tired, I drink a cup of coffee and take a short work to stay in a jeticle which helped me concentrate better and breath the fresh air.

✓ When I feel tired, I drink a cup of coffee and take a short walk to stay in a quiet place, which helps me concentrate better and breathe fresh air.

这句话描述的是经常发生的习惯，所以关系从句应使用一般现在时“helps”，而不是过去时“helped”。另外，“which”指代前面的习惯或行为时，动词也应与现在的习惯保持一致。

× If I do it so tidal, I I will keep the meeting short or drink a coffee beforehand so I can stay awake.

✓ If I feel especially tired, I will keep the meeting short or drink coffee beforehand so I can stay awake.

主语“I”在原句中重复了一次，应删除一个。英语中一个从句通常只需要一个主语。

× If I do it so tidal, I I will keep the meeting short or drink a coffee beforehand so I can stay awake.

✓ If I feel especially tired, I will keep the meeting short or drink coffee beforehand so I can stay awake.

“do it so tidal”不能正确表达“感到特别累”。表示身体状态时，应使用“feel + 形容词”，例如“feel especially tired”。

× If I do it so tidal, I I will keep the meeting short or drink a coffee beforehand so I can stay awake.

✓ If I feel especially tired, I will keep the meeting short or drink coffee beforehand so I can stay awake.

条件句的结构应为“If + 主语 + 一般现在时，主语 + will + 动词原形”。这里应使用“If I feel especially tired”，后面再接“I will keep”。