Tiredness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevabınız doğrudan ve doğal, ancak iki kısa cümle biraz yetersiz kalıyor. Bir neden veya kısa bir açıklama ekleyerek cevabı geliştirin. Örneğin, genellikle yeterince uyuduğunuzu ya da günlük rutininizin çok yoğun olmadığını söyleyebilirsiniz.

예시: Not really. I usually get enough sleep, so I rarely feel tired during the day.

제안: Ana fikir anlaşılır, ancak dilbilgisi ve cümle yapısında hatalar var: “we going” yerine “we go” veya “we are shopping”, “at the end of the day” kullanılmalı. “I feel so tired” ifadesi tekrar edilmiş; ikinci cümlede “by the end of the day” gibi farklı bir ifade kullanın. Cevabı neden ve sonuç bağlantısıyla daha doğal hâle getirin.

예시: I usually feel tired after spending the whole day with my friends. For example, if we go shopping and then eat at several restaurants, I’m usually exhausted by the end of the day.

제안: Cevabınızda ne yaptığınız tam olarak anlaşılmakta zorlanıyor. Fiil biçimlerini düzeltmelisiniz: “take a deep breath and think” ve “pretend that I don’t feel exhausted.” Ayrıca “I just believe that” ifadesi tamamlanmamış ve doğal değil. Önce doğrudan cevabı verin, ardından bunun size nasıl yardımcı olduğunu açıklayın.

예시: When I feel tired, I usually take a short break and take a few deep breaths. This helps me relax, and then I can get back to what I’m doing.

제안: “Yes” ile doğrudan cevap vermeniz iyi, ancak ikinci bölüm anlaşılmıyor ve soruyla bağlantı kurmuyor. “The person who is my friend” yerine “my friends” demelisiniz; “have to vote this” ifadesi de muhtemelen anlatmak istediğiniz anlamı vermiyor. Yorgun olsanız bile neden dışarı çıktığınızı veya planı kimin belirlediğini açıkça belirtin.

예시: Yes, I sometimes do, but it depends on how tired I am. If I’m only a little tired, I still go out because spending time with my friends helps me relax.

× I feel so tired when I'm with my friends and all day we going shopping and then we're going to restaurants.

✓ I feel so tired when I'm with my friends, we go shopping all day, and then we go to restaurants.

The verb phrase we going is missing the auxiliary verb are. In the simple present, use we go to describe a regular activity. The repeated situation also requires consistent present-tense verbs: go shopping and go to restaurants.

× And end of the day I feel so tired.

✓ At the end of the day, I feel so tired.

Use the preposition at with the expression at the end of the day. This phrase describes a specific point in time.

× And end of the day I feel so tired.

✓ At the end of the day, I feel so tired.

The fixed expression requires the definite article the: the end of the day. Use the when referring to the specific end of a particular period.

× I just take a deep breath and thinking and acting like I'm not feel exhausted.

✓ I just take a deep breath, think, and act like I'm not feeling exhausted.

The verbs after and should be parallel. Because the first verb is in the base form take, the other coordinated verbs should also be in the base form: think and act, not thinking and acting.

× I just take a deep breath and thinking and acting like I'm not feel exhausted.

✓ I just take a deep breath, think, and act like I'm not feeling exhausted.

After the auxiliary verb am, use the present participle form ending in -ing. Therefore, use I'm not feeling, not I'm not feel. Remember the pattern be + verb-ing for the present continuous.

× Yes, but uh, the person who is my friend, uh, have to vote this.

✓ Yes, but my friend has to vote on this.

The subject my friend is singular, so the modal-like expression has to must use has, not have. Singular third-person subjects require has to.

× Yes, but uh, the person who is my friend, uh, have to vote this.

✓ Yes, but my friend has to vote on this.

The verb vote normally takes the preposition on when referring to a subject or proposal: vote on this. The phrase vote this is not grammatically appropriate in this context.