Tiredness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly and avoid pauses, repetition, and unfinished self-corrections. Use the present simple for a general habit: “I often feel tired, especially after school.” Then add one specific reason or result. Also, say “after school,” not “after the school,” and use “exhausted” only when you mean extremely tired.

예시: Yes, I often feel tired, especially after school. I usually have several classes and assignments, so I feel exhausted when I get home. However, I normally relax for a while before starting my homework.

제안: Do not refer to your previous answer because each response should be clear and complete on its own. Give a direct time or situation, and use the present simple for routines: “when I get home from school” and “when I do my homework.” Avoid the unnecessary phrase “right now,” which changes the meaning to the current moment.

예시: I usually feel tired when I get home from school, especially if I have had a busy day. I also start feeling sleepy when I do my homework in the evening because I have to concentrate for a long time.

제안: Use the present simple rather than the present continuous for repeated actions: “I generally take a nap” and “I drink coffee.” Avoid repeating “generally” and “tired.” Also, say “an energy drink” or simply “some coffee,” not “some energies.” Connect the two actions clearly with “if” or “otherwise.”

예시: I usually take a short nap when I feel tired. If I do not have time to sleep, I drink some coffee instead. This helps me stay awake and finish my homework.

제안: Your answer is understandable and gives reasons, but “addicted to my comfort zone” is unnatural in this context. Say “I prefer staying at home” or “I feel more comfortable at home.” Replace “social batteries for talking with peoples” with “the energy to socialize” or “the energy to talk to people.” Avoid repeating “also,” and use a clear structure: answer, reason, and consequence.

예시: No, I usually stay at home when I feel tired. I prefer to rest in my comfort zone, and I do not have enough energy to socialize, especially if I am hungry as well. I normally meet my friends when I feel refreshed.

× Especially when I came home after the school, I'm always feeling very exhausted.

✓ Especially when I come home after school, I always feel very exhausted.

The speaker describes a regular situation, so the present tense is needed: come and feel, not came and am feeling. The simple present is generally used for repeated habits and routines.

× Especially when I came home after the school, I'm always feeling very exhausted.

✓ Especially when I come home after school, I always feel very exhausted.

School is used without the definite article when referring to the regular activity or routine of attending school. Therefore, say after school, not after the school.

× I said it already but generally when I came back home to the school and when I'm doing my homework right now, I mean.

✓ I already said that, but generally, I feel tired when I come home from school and when I do my homework.

These are recurring situations, so use the simple present: come and do. The past form came does not fit a regular routine, and the present continuous am doing is not necessary here.

× I said it already but generally when I came back home to the school and when I'm doing my homework right now, I mean.

✓ I already said that, but generally, I feel tired when I come home from school and when I do my homework.

The natural preposition is from because the speaker returns home from school. The phrase come home to the school incorrectly suggests that the speaker is going to school.

× I'm generally generally taking nap but if I can't I'm taking some energies like coffee.

✓ I generally take a nap, but if I cannot, I drink something with caffeine, such as coffee.

The speaker is describing a usual response to tiredness, so use the simple present: take and drink, not am taking. The simple present is the appropriate tense for habits.

× I'm generally generally taking nap but if I can't I'm taking some energies like coffee.

✓ I generally take a nap, but if I cannot, I drink something with caffeine, such as coffee.

Nap is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. The correct phrase is take a nap, not take nap.

× I'm generally generally taking nap but if I can't I'm taking some energies like coffee.

✓ I generally take a nap, but if I cannot, I drink something with caffeine, such as coffee.

Energy is normally uncountable when it refers to physical or mental strength, so energies is not suitable here. Also, coffee is a drink, not a type of energy. Use energy or something with caffeine instead.

× I'm generally drinking coffee to avoid too tired.

✓ I generally drink coffee to avoid being too tired.

The verb avoid is followed by a noun or a gerund phrase. Because tired is an adjective, it needs the verb being: avoid being too tired. The simple present drink is used because this is a regular habit.

× I'm generally drinking coffee to avoid too tired.

✓ I generally drink coffee to avoid being too tired.

This sentence describes a usual action, so use the simple present drink rather than the present continuous am drinking. Use the present continuous only for an action happening around the time of speaking.

× No, I don't because I'm really addicted to my comfort zone, and also when I'm tired and also hungry I don't have any social batteries for talking with peoples.

✓ No, I don't, because I'm really attached to my comfort zone. Also, when I'm tired and hungry, I don't have any social energy to talk with people.

People is already the plural form of person, so peoples is incorrect in this context. Use people when referring generally to more than one person.