Tiredness— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you often feel tired?
수험생
Yes I often feel exhausted after working. I'm a teacher in China and I have to give lecture to one hundred students every day.
시험관
When would you feel tired?
수험생
I usually get tired after working for a long time. For example, after an eight hour ship, I feel exhausted because I've been standing and concentrating all day.
시험관
What do you do when you feel tired?
수험생
I usually take a bath first, then go for work around the neighborhood, also put my smartphone away to avoid information overload. This will help me clear my mind and relax.
시험관
When you feel tired, do you still go out with your friends?
수험생
Oh my God, never I mean I'm an introverted person. Chatting with friends could drain my energy after work.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you often feel tired?
점수: 78.0제안: 回答直接，原因也比较具体，但应注意语法和搭配： “give lecture”应改为“give lectures”或“teach a class”，“after working”可以改为更自然的“after work”。此外，可以加入一个结果或感受，使答案更完整。
예시: Yes, I often feel tired after work. I’m a teacher in China, and I give lectures to around one hundred students every day. Speaking and managing such a large class can be exhausting, especially in the afternoon.
When would you feel tired?
점수: 74.0제안: 答案结构清晰，也提供了例子和原因。不过，“eight hour ship”是明显的词汇错误，应改为“an eight-hour shift”。注意复合形容词中的连字符，并使用“working an eight-hour shift”使表达更自然。
예시: I usually feel tired after working for a long time. For example, after an eight-hour shift, I feel exhausted because I’ve been standing and concentrating on my work all day. This is especially true when I have several classes to teach.
What do you do when you feel tired?
점수: 72.0제안: 回答内容丰富，包含了洗澡、散步和远离手机等具体做法，但“go for work”应改为“go for a walk”，“also”连接不自然。建议使用“After that”或“Finally”组织步骤，并将“information overload”与放松之间的关系表达得更清楚。
예시: When I feel tired, I usually take a bath first. After that, I go for a walk around my neighborhood and put my smartphone away to avoid information overload. These activities help me clear my mind and relax before I go to bed.
When you feel tired, do you still go out with your friends?
점수: 76.0제안: 观点明确，理由也符合问题，但“Oh my God”在雅思口语中略显随意；“never”后面的句子结构不自然。可以改为“No, almost never”或“I usually prefer to stay at home”，并补充一个具体活动来丰富答案。
예시: No, almost never. I’m quite an introverted person, so chatting with friends can drain my energy after a long day at work. Instead, I usually stay at home, have a quiet dinner, and watch something relaxing.
문법
× I'm a teacher in China and I have to give lecture to one hundred students every day.
✓ I'm a teacher in China, and I have to give lectures to one hundred students every day.
“lecture”是可数名词。这里表示每天进行的一般性教学活动，应该使用复数形式“lectures”。如果只指一场讲座，也可以说“give a lecture”，但不能直接说“give lecture”。
× I usually take a bath first, then go for work around the neighborhood, also put my smartphone away to avoid information overload.
✓ I usually take a bath first, then go for a walk around the neighborhood, and put my smartphone away to avoid information overload.
表示“去散步”时，英语固定搭配是“go for a walk”，不能说“go for work”。另外，“go for a walk”和“put my smartphone away”是两个并列动作，使用“and”连接会更准确、清晰。
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