Tiredness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is short, slightly confused by the echoed question, and lacks detail and cohesion. Give a clear direct response, avoid repeating the examiner's question, and add one or two brief supporting reasons or examples using linking words (for example, “because” or “so”) within 3–4 sentences total.

예시: Yes, I often feel tired, especially at the end of a busy day because I work long hours. For example, after a full day at the office I usually feel mentally drained, so I try to relax by reading or taking a short walk.

제안: The answer is relevant but too short and lacks specifics. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific details about the situations, frequency, or times when you feel tired, and use a linking word such as “especially” or “usually” to connect ideas.

예시: I usually feel tired in the late afternoon or evening, especially after a long day at work. For instance, after several hours of concentrated computer work I often feel exhausted and need a break.

제안: This reply is one word and not natural or informative. Provide a complete sentence, describe typical actions you take to recover, and use linking words like “so” or “then” to show sequence. Mention one or two realistic strategies with brief reasons.

예시: When I feel tired, I usually take a short nap or rest for about twenty to thirty minutes so I can recharge. If I can't sleep, I prefer to relax by listening to music or stretching, because it helps me feel more alert.

× Do you have to feel tired?

✓ Do you often feel tired?

The student's response repeats the examiner's question incorrectly by using 'have to', which implies obligation rather than frequency. This is an incorrect use of auxiliary/modal expression and pronoun reference for the intended meaning. Use 'Do you often feel tired?' to match the examiner's original question about frequency. Suggestion: mirror the question's structure and use adverbs of frequency (often, sometimes) rather than 'have to'.

× After doing work.

✓ After doing work, I feel tired.

The original fragment 'After doing work.' is a sentence fragment without a main verb; this is an incorrect sentence structure and missing the subject and verb. It uses a gerund phrase without completing the sentence. Add subject and verb to form a complete answer: 'After doing work, I feel tired.' Suggestion: include the subject and a finite verb to complete the thought.

× Asleep.

✓ I fall asleep.

The reply 'Asleep.' is a one-word fragment and lacks a verb and proper sentence structure. It should be a full sentence that fits the question 'What do you do when you feel tired?' A natural full answer is 'I fall asleep.' or 'I go to sleep.' Suggestion: provide a subject and verb to answer the action taken when tired.