Tiredness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the response more natural and concise: use correct tense, start with a clear topic sentence, and add one specific supporting detail. Avoid repetition and split into at most 4–5 sentences. Use linking words for clarity.

예시: Yes, I often feel tired in the mornings. For example, I sometimes want to sleep longer, but I force myself to get up so I can leave for work on time.

제안: Start with a direct topic sentence and give a concise, specific reason. Use appropriate word forms and a linking phrase to connect cause and effect. Avoid vague phrases like "all the trouble."

예시: I usually feel most tired and frustrated when a colleague fails to finish their tasks, because I then have to complete the extra work and meet the deadline.

제안: Use correct grammar and provide a bit more detail: state a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific actions and link them. Keep it natural and brief.

예시: When I feel tired, I take a few deep breaths to relax and then I take a short walk or make a cup of tea to recharge before returning to work.

× Yes, especially when I woke up in the morning.

✓ Yes, especially when I wake up in the morning.

The student used past tense 'woke' but the question asks about a habitual situation (Do you often feel tired?). Use present simple 'wake' to describe regular occurrences.

× I feel so tired and I wanted to sleep more, but I know that I have to get up to go to work.

✓ I feel so tired and I want to sleep more, but I know that I have to get up to go to work.

Mixing past 'wanted' with present 'feel' and 'know' is inconsistent. For habitual or current feelings, use present simple 'want' to match the context.

× To be sure that I'm on time.

✓ I do this to be sure that I'm on time.

This fragment lacks a main verb and subject, making it a sentence without a verb. Adding 'I do this' connects it to the previous sentence and completes the structure.

× I feel extreme tired when I know my colleague didn't do the job that is supposed to be done.

✓ I feel extremely tired when I know my colleague didn't do the job that was supposed to be done.

Use the adverb 'extremely' to modify 'tired' instead of the adjective 'extreme'. Also, 'was supposed to be done' is more natural for a past situation.

× So I feel very tired and frustrated and I have to fix all the trouble.

✓ So I feel very tired and frustrated and I have to fix all the problems.

'Trouble' is uncountable or means difficulty; in this context 'problems' (plural) is the correct noun. The rest of the sentence is present and matches the habitual context.

× I would take a deep breath and then calm me down.

✓ I would take a deep breath and then calm myself down.

The reflexive pronoun 'myself' is required when the subject and object are the same person. 'Calm me down' is incorrect in this reflexive context.