Tiredness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Keep the direct answer but make it more concise, correct grammar, and add one specific reason or consequence. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes, I have been feeling quite tired recently because I study during the day and only have a few hours at night to practice speaking and writing. As a result, I often feel mentally drained by the evening and find it hard to concentrate.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence, fix grammar and repetition, and add a specific detail (time or frequency). Use a linking word to explain reason and a brief effect.

예시: I usually feel most tired on my commute home from the office. Because I often can't find a seat on the MRT after a long workday, I feel physically exhausted and sometimes struggle to stand up straight.

제안: Give a direct answer, correct grammar and awkward phrasing, and add one specific detail about why the hot bath helps or how often you do it. Keep it concise.

예시: I usually have a hot bath when I'm exhausted because it helps relax my muscles and clear my mind. After the bath I feel calmer and sleep much more soundly.

× Yes, to be honest recently I've been really tired about preparing for this exam because I need to study in the day and only half time in the night to practice my speaking and writing, which was really, really tiresome.

✓ Yes, to be honest, recently I've been really tired from preparing for this exam because I need to study during the day and only have half the night to practice my speaking and writing, which has been really, really tiresome.

Present tense issue (ID 6) and article/word choice issues (ID 22). Use 'tired from preparing' not 'tired about preparing'. Use 'during the day' instead of 'in the day'. Express 'only have half the night' rather than 'only half time in the night'. Match tenses: 'has been really, really tiresome' agrees with 'I've been really tired' and refers to the recent period. Suggestion: simplify phrases and keep consistent present perfect continuous when describing ongoing recent states.

× I always feel exhausted from my way from the office to the dormitory because on the MRT I usually don't have a seat to sit down and the long day just have have made me so tired that I couldn't even stand straight.

✓ I always feel exhausted on my way from the office to the dormitory because on the MRT I usually don't have a seat, and the long day has made me so tired that I can hardly even stand straight.

Subject-verb agreement and past/present tense issue (IDs 27 and 6). Use 'exhausted on my way' instead of 'from my way'. Remove repeated word 'have'. Change 'the long day just have have made me' to 'the long day has made me' to match singular 'day'. 'Couldn't even stand' implies past ability; 'can hardly even stand' fits the habitual/ongoing context. Suggestion: ensure verbs agree with their subjects and choose tense (habitual present vs past) consistently.

× I usually go for a hot bath when I'm really exhausted because it feels like it's a bath can really wash off all the tiredness of me and makes me prepared for the night a sound sleep.

✓ I usually take a hot bath when I'm really exhausted because it feels like a bath can really wash away all my tiredness and prepare me for a sound night's sleep.

Article errors and sentence structure issues (IDs 22 and 26). Use 'take a hot bath' rather than 'go for a hot bath'. Use 'a bath can really wash away' instead of the ungrammatical 'it's a bath can really wash off'. Use 'wash away' and possessive 'my tiredness' rather than 'the tiredness of me'. 'Prepare me for a sound night's sleep' is correct word order and uses the possessive form 'night's'. Suggestion: use common collocations ('take a bath', 'wash away tiredness', 'sound night's sleep') and keep clear subject-verb relations.