Tiredness— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you often feel tired?
수험생
I don't usually feel tired, I can balance my life and study well and if I feel tired I will try to relax and work or just take a break or snake so I don't usually feel tired.
시험관
When would you feel tired?
수험생
I usually feel tired if I work or study for a long time, which means I spend a lot of time doing one thing and I also will try to have a snap or take a break or just.
시험관
What do you do when you feel tired?
수험생
I usually have a short walk or have a nap when I feel tired, which really refreshes my brain. For example, I always take 20 minutes work to refresh my brain so that I can focus on study.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you often feel tired?
점수: 68.0제안: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct small mistakes (e.g., 'snake' → 'snack' or 'sneak' is wrong; use 'nap' or 'short break').
예시: I don't often feel tired because I keep a good balance between study and rest. For example, I schedule regular short breaks and take a 15–20 minute nap when needed, which helps me stay alert.
When would you feel tired?
점수: 60.0제안: Provide a clearer, complete answer and avoid trailing off. Use linking words to explain conditions and consequences, and use precise vocabulary ('nap' not 'snap').
예시: I feel tired when I study or work continuously for several hours. In that case, I usually take a short break or a 20-minute nap so I can recharge and maintain concentration.
What do you do when you feel tired?
점수: 72.0제안: Good specific actions and example, but watch grammar and clarity. Use linking words (for example, so, because) correctly and correct phrasing like 'take a 20-minute nap' or 'take 20 minutes to rest'. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.
예시: When I feel tired, I either go for a short walk or take a 20-minute nap because these activities refresh my mind. For example, after an hour of studying I usually rest for 20 minutes so I can return to work more focused.
문법
× 'I don't usually feel tired, I can balance my life and study well and if I feel tired I will try to relax and work or just take a break or snake so I don't usually feel tired.'
✓ 'I don't usually feel tired. I can balance my life and my studies well, and if I feel tired I try to relax, rest, or just take a break, so I usually do not get very tired.'
'Subject-verb agreement and sentence structure issues: Run-on sentence and inconsistent subject-verb forms made the sentence unclear. Use full stops or coordinating conjunctions to separate ideas, keep verb forms consistent (use present simple for habitual actions), and correct word choice (snake -> nap/rest). Also use plural for countable noun "studies" and avoid repeating the same idea. Suggestion: break into shorter sentences, use commas appropriately, and choose correct vocabulary.'},{
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