Tiredness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve sentence structure, use a clear topic sentence and natural phrasing. Avoid filler words like “actually” and contractions that sound unnatural in this context. Keep it concise (1–2 sentences) and directly answer the question, then add a brief supporting detail if needed.

예시: Not really. I don't feel tired today because I slept well last night, so I have plenty of energy.

제안: Use a clear, grammatical sentence to state when you feel tired, and give specific reasons. Remove repeated words and unnatural phrases. Use linking words to connect cause and effect (for example, “because”). Keep the answer within 2–3 sentences and be specific about times or situations.

예시: I usually feel tired when I have to wake up very early or when I go to bed late, because I don't get enough hours of sleep.

제안: Provide a clear main action and one or two specific alternatives. Avoid repetitions and vague phrases. Use linking words (for example, “or”) properly and give a short reason or example. Keep it to 1–3 sentences.

예시: When I feel tired, I usually take a short nap to recharge. If I can't sleep, I prefer to relax by reading a book or listening to soft music.

× Actually not today I am good and don't feel tired.

✓ Actually, not today; I am fine and don't feel tired.

The sentence has tense and word choice issues: 'good' is better as 'fine' when describing how one feels, and the original lacks punctuation. This is a present tense statement, so use simple present 'am' and 'don't feel'. Suggestion: add commas/semicolons and use 'fine' for natural expression. Note: This correction follows Present tense issue (ID 6).

× Actually I feel tired when I wake up at the more early and sleep and late.

✓ Actually, I feel tired when I wake up very early and go to sleep late.

Problems include incorrect word order and choice: 'the more early' is ungrammatical; use 'very early'. 'Sleep and late' should be 'go to sleep late' or 'sleep late'. The sentence describes habitual present, so use simple present 'feel', 'wake up', and 'go to sleep'. Suggestion: use adverb 'very' before 'early' and the verb phrase 'go to sleep late' for clarity. Note: This correction follows Present tense issue (ID 6) and Incorrect order/word choice.

× This is AI feel tired because I don't have enough sleep time time of sleep.

✓ I feel tired because I don't get enough sleep.

The original has sentence structure and word choice errors ('This is AI feel tired', repeated 'time', and awkward 'time of sleep'). The intended meaning is a present-state cause: use 'I feel tired because I don't get enough sleep.' Suggestion: remove extraneous words, use 'get enough sleep' to express sufficient sleep in natural English. Note: This correction follows Sentence structure errors (ID 26).

× Actually I want to sleep or or do something.

✓ Actually, I want to sleep or do something else.

The sentence contains repetition 'or or' and lacks clarity. The verb 'want' should be followed by the base verb 'to sleep' or 'to do', but in natural speech 'I want to sleep or do something else' is clearer. Suggestion: remove duplicate word and add 'else' to contrast options. Note: This correction follows Verb in the present participle form (ID 10) because the verb complement form was mishandled.

× Don't do something I like it to do.

✓ I don't want to do anything I don't enjoy doing.

The original is confusing and ungrammatical: 'Don't do something I like it to do' mixes negative imperative with a clause. The student likely means they avoid activities they don't like. Use 'I don't want to do anything I don't enjoy doing' or 'I don't do things I don't like.' Suggestion: choose a clear negative structure and avoid duplicating subject pronouns. Note: This correction follows Sentence structure errors (ID 26).