Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答提到了父母，但时态和表达不清楚。“politic”是“政治的”，这里应使用“polite”；“my parents tell me”应改为过去时“my parents taught/told me”。请说明父母具体教了你什么，例如说“please”和“thank you”，并解释这样做的原因。避免重复和不完整的结尾。

예시: My parents taught me to be polite when I was a child. They reminded me to say “please” and “thank you” and to listen when other people were speaking. They said that good manners show respect.

제안: 回答直接表达了观点，也提供了一个理由，但“protized”不是正确用词。可以说“polite”或“a polite person”。除了交朋友，也可以补充礼貌能表达尊重，让交流更愉快。注意让理由与观点衔接自然。

예시: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it shows respect for others. It can also make conversations more pleasant and help us build friendships.

제안: 答案的意思不够清楚，“I'm angry”与问题不太相关，后半句也有重复。请直接列举需要礼貌的场合，例如初次见面、与长辈交谈或在公共场所，并用“especially”或“for example”连接细节。

예시: We should be polite whenever we interact with other people, especially when meeting someone for the first time. We should also show respect when speaking to older people or people in a position of authority.

제안: 答案提到了打招呼，但时态与问题不一致：问题问童年经历，应使用过去时，如“I said”。“old peoples”应改为“older people”，“tell talk”和“hears loudly not loudly”意思不清。请用简单、具体的行为作答，例如主动问候长辈，并轻声、有礼貌地和他们交谈；避免未完成的结尾。

예시: As a child, I showed politeness by saying hello to older people when I saw them. I also spoke to them respectfully and tried not to interrupt. My parents taught me to use polite words like “please” and “thank you”.

× When I was when I was a child my parents tell me you must be a politic child.

✓ When I was a child, my parents told me, “You must be a politic child.”

这里描述的是童年时父母说过的话，主句应使用一般过去时，因此 tell 应改为 told。重复的“When I was”属于口语重复，不作为本次语法问题处理。

× If you do this you will have have a most tiny boys.

✓ If you do this, you will have the tiniest boys.

tiny 的最高级通常写作 tiniest；最高级前通常使用定冠词 the，而不是 a。原句中的 have 重复属于口语重复，不单独归入所列语法类型。

× If you do this you will have have a most tiny boys.

✓ If you do this, you will have the tiniest boys.

a 只能修饰单数可数名词，但 boys 是复数，所以不能使用 a。修改时应确保冠词与名词的单复数形式一致。

× When I meet new people I'm angry, older old meet some people older than me.

✓ I should be polite when I meet new people or people older than me.

原句中的多个短语没有清楚地组成完整、连贯的句子，意思也难以辨认。回答“什么场合应该有礼貌”时，可以用一个完整句子说明场合，例如“I should be polite when...”。

× When I meet old peoples, I may I will say hello and I will tell talk to him or her hears loudly not loudly. It's

✓ When I met older people, I would say hello and speak to them, not loudly.

问题问的是过去做过什么，因此叙述过去的动作时应使用过去时：meet 改为 met。描述过去习惯性行为时，可以用 would，而不是直接使用表示现在或将来的形式。

× When I meet old peoples, I may I will say hello and I will tell talk to him or her hears loudly not loudly. It's

✓ When I met older people, I would say hello and speak to them, not loudly.

people 本身已经是复数形式，通常不加 -s。表示年龄较大的人时，可以说 older people。

× When I meet old peoples, I may I will say hello and I will tell talk to him or her hears loudly not loudly. It's

✓ When I met older people, I would say hello and speak to them, not loudly.

原句把 may 和 will 重复、混乱地放在一起。回答过去的习惯时，可以使用 would 表示“过去常常会做”。避免在同一处连续使用多个意思不清的情态动词。

× When I meet old peoples, I may I will say hello and I will tell talk to him or her hears loudly not loudly. It's

✓ When I met older people, I would say hello and speak to them, not loudly.

前面说的是复数 people，后面用 them 指代更一致。改写时应确保代词与它所指代的名词在数上相符。

× When I meet old peoples, I may I will say hello and I will tell talk to him or her hears loudly not loudly. It's

✓ When I met older people, I would say hello and speak to them, not loudly.

原句中“I may I will”和“tell talk”等表达重复，动词之间的关系不清楚；结尾的“It's”也没有构成完整句子。表达时应保留一个清楚的谓语结构，并避免未完成的句子。