Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 先直接回答你是从母亲那里学会礼貌的。注意使用“tell someone to do something”结构，因此应说“tell me to say”；“learned to like this”不符合这里的意思，可改为“learned to be polite”。还可以补充一个具体情境，例如母亲如何提醒你向别人道谢。

예시: I learned to be polite mainly from my mom. She always reminded me to say “please” when asking for something and “thank you” when someone helped me. Over time, those expressions became a natural habit.

제안: 观点明确，但句子结构不完整：“you basically spreading”应改为“you are basically spreading”，而句末的“if”多余。避免用“when you are outside”限定礼貌，因为礼貌在各种场合都重要。可用“because”说明理由，并举出礼貌如何改善日常交流。

예시: Yes, definitely. Being polite is important because it helps people feel respected and makes everyday interactions more pleasant. For example, a simple “thank you” can make someone feel that their help is appreciated.

제안: 回答没有准确回应“哪些场合”，而且“whenever we don't need to be angry”表达不自然，也容易让人误解为生气时就不必礼貌。建议说明礼貌适用于日常生活中的各种场合，再列举与陌生人、同事或服务人员交流等具体例子。

예시: We should be polite in almost every situation, especially when speaking with strangers, colleagues, or service staff. Even if there is a disagreement, staying respectful can help prevent the conversation from becoming unpleasant.

제안: 内容切题，但时态应使用过去式“said”，因为问题问的是童年经历。表达“说‘打扰一下’和‘谢谢’”时，可写成“said ‘excuse me’ and ‘thank you’”。建议再补充一个具体场景，让回答更完整自然。

예시: As a child, I often said “excuse me” when I needed to get past someone and “thank you” when an adult helped me. My parents encouraged me to use these phrases in everyday situations.

× My mom used to tell me say please or say thank you to anyone that helps you.

✓ My mom used to tell me to say please or thank you to anyone that helps you.

“tell someone”后面表示让某人做某事时，应使用“tell someone to do something”的结构。因此要在“me”和“say”之间加“to”。

× Yes, of course if you always use thank you when you are outside and you basically spreading positive energy into the world and that really makes difference if.

✓ Yes, of course. If you always use “thank you” when you are outside, you are basically spreading positive energy into the world, and that really makes a difference.

“you basically spreading”缺少现在进行时所需的be动词。主语是“you”时应使用“are”，构成“you are spreading”。

× Yes, of course if you always use thank you when you are outside and you basically spreading positive energy into the world and that really makes difference if.

✓ Yes, of course. If you always use “thank you” when you are outside, you are basically spreading positive energy into the world, and that really makes a difference.

“make a difference”是固定表达，表示“产生影响／有所不同”。“difference”是单数可数名词，前面需要加不定冠词“a”。

× Yes, of course if you always use thank you when you are outside and you basically spreading positive energy into the world and that really makes difference if.

✓ Yes, of course. If you always use “thank you” when you are outside, you are basically spreading positive energy into the world, and that really makes a difference.

句末的“if”引出了条件从句，但后面没有对应内容，导致句子结构不完整。这里应删除句末多余的“if”，并将前面的条件从句与主句连接完整。

× I say excuse me thank you to others to show my politeness as a child.

✓ I said “excuse me” and “thank you” to others to show my politeness as a child.

问题询问的是小时候做过什么，描述过去的行为应使用一般过去时。因此，“say”应改为过去式“said”。

× I say excuse me thank you to others to show my politeness as a child.

✓ I said “excuse me” and “thank you” to others to show my politeness as a child.

这里列举了两句礼貌用语，需要用连词“and”连接“excuse me”和“thank you”，使表达清楚完整。