Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答直接说明了父母是主要影响来源，也给出了具体例子，结构基本清楚。但“plying”应为“polite”，“remind”应使用过去时“reminded”，并且“you”应与主语保持一致，改为“I”。可以使用“for example”连接细节，并避免重复使用“always taught/remind”。

예시: I mainly learned to be polite from my parents when I was a child. They taught me to say “thank you” whenever someone helped me and to apologize when I hurt someone. For example, they often reminded me to use polite expressions when talking to adults.

제안: 回答观点明确，并通过“because”和“For example”补充了原因和场景，内容有效。需要注意主谓一致：“politeness shows”和“helps”；“atomphere”应拼写为“atmosphere”。可以减少“politeness”的重复，用“it”或“polite behavior”替代，使表达更自然。

예시: Yes, definitely. Being polite is important because it shows respect and helps people get along with one another. For example, polite behavior makes it easier to build friendships and creates a positive atmosphere at school or work.

제안: 回答尝试举出婚礼这一具体场合，但第一句“the first occasion that came to my mind is already”表达不清，可能想说“a wedding”。“a happiness time that young couple to celebrate their marriage”语法和搭配错误，应改为“a happy occasion when a young couple celebrates their marriage”。建议先直接回答场合，再说明为什么需要礼貌。

예시: We should be polite on many occasions, especially at weddings. A wedding is a happy and important event when a couple celebrates their marriage. Guests should show respect by speaking appropriately, congratulating the couple, and following the event’s etiquette.

제안: 回答提供了说“thank you”和“sorry”、保持环境整洁等具体行为，内容较丰富。但时态应统一为过去时，如“said”“apologized”“threw”“kept”；“my teacher always taught me”与前文重复，可以合并。最后的“in order”是不完整表达，应改为“to keep the classroom tidy”或“as a sign of respect”。建议使用“also”或“in addition”连接不同例子。

예시: As a child, I showed politeness by saying “thank you” when someone helped me and apologizing when I made a mistake. I also threw rubbish into the bin and kept my desk tidy, because my teacher taught us to respect shared spaces. These were simple ways to show consideration for other people.

× When I was a child, I learned to be plying mainly from my parents.

✓ When I was a child, I learned to be polite mainly from my parents.

“plying”不是表示“有礼貌的”正确词语。这里需要使用形容词“polite”来描述一个人的行为或性格。

× They always remind me to say thank you if someone helped you and they always taught me to say sorry if I hurt someone.

✓ They always reminded me to say thank you if someone helped me, and they always taught me to say sorry if I hurt someone.

整段是在描述童年时的经历，因此“remind”应改为过去式“reminded”，与“was”“taught”保持时态一致。

× They always remind me to say thank you if someone helped you and they always taught me to say sorry if I hurt someone.

✓ They always reminded me to say thank you if someone helped me, and they always taught me to say sorry if I hurt someone.

主句的对象是“我”（me），所以从句中也应使用“me”，而不是“you”。应保持人称一致。

× Of course, I think politeness is very important because politeness show respect and help people get along.

✓ Of course, I think politeness is very important because politeness shows respect and helps people get along.

“politeness”是不可数名词，作单数主语，因此后面的动词要用第三人称单数形式：“show”改为“shows”，“help”改为“helps”。

× To be honest, the first occasion that came to my mind is already.

✓ To be honest, the first occasion that came to my mind is a wedding.

“already”表示“已经”，不能在这里作“occasion is”的表语。根据下一句的意思，这里应使用名词短语“a wedding”来说明具体场合。

× It is a happiness time that young couple to celebrate their marriage and I think it is necessary for guests to be polite and show respect to everyone.

✓ It is a happy time for a young couple to celebrate their marriage, and I think it is necessary for guests to be polite and show respect to everyone.

“happiness”是名词，不能直接修饰“time”；这里需要形容词“happy”。“happy time”表示“快乐的时光”。

× It is a happiness time that young couple to celebrate their marriage and I think it is necessary for guests to be polite and show respect to everyone.

✓ It is a happy time for a young couple to celebrate their marriage, and I think it is necessary for guests to be polite and show respect to everyone.

表示“对某人来说是……的时间”或“某人做某事的时间”时，应使用介词“for”，所以要说“a happy time for a young couple”。

× It is a happiness time that young couple to celebrate their marriage and I think it is necessary for guests to be polite and show respect to everyone.

✓ It is a happy time for a young couple to celebrate their marriage, and I think it is necessary for guests to be polite and show respect to everyone.

“couple”是可数名词单数，前面需要冠词。这里指一对年轻夫妇，因此应使用“a young couple”。

× It is a happiness time that young couple to celebrate their marriage and I think it is necessary for guests to be polite and show respect to everyone.

✓ It is a happy time for a young couple to celebrate their marriage, and I think it is necessary for guests to be polite and show respect to everyone.

“that young couple to celebrate”结构不完整且不正确。应使用“for + 人 + to do”的结构，即“for a young couple to celebrate”。

× As I said before, my parents taught me to be polite so I always say thank you and sorry to others.

✓ As I said before, my parents taught me to be polite, so I always said thank you and sorry to others.

句子描述的是童年时期的习惯，且使用了过去时“taught”，因此“say”应改为过去式“said”。

× At the same time my teacher always taught me to be polite.

✓ At the same time, my teacher always taught me to be polite.

这里的“the”并不是必要的语法成分；主要问题是句首短语后需要逗号。由于指定的错误类型中没有标点错误，因此不需要进行语法类型归类或额外修改。

× So I always throw the rubbish into the bin and keep my table tidy in order.

✓ So I always threw the rubbish into the bin and kept my table tidy and in order.

句子讲述的是过去的童年经历，所以“throw”和“keep”都应使用过去式：“threw”和“kept”。

× So I always throw the rubbish into the bin and keep my table tidy in order.

✓ So I always threw the rubbish into the bin and kept my table tidy and in order.

“tidy”和“in order”是两个并列的补语，需要用“and”连接。正确表达是“keep my table tidy and in order”。