Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly by saying that your parents and teachers taught you politeness. Correct the repeated and unclear phrases, such as “when I was child,” “when I was chill,” and “a lot of manner.” Use the past tense consistently: “taught,” “told,” and “went.” Add one specific example of a polite behavior you learned, and connect the ideas with “also” or “as well as” without repeating them.

예시: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents and teachers. When I was young, my parents taught me to say “please” and “thank you” and to respect older people. My teachers reinforced these manners at school, especially when I interacted with my classmates.

제안: Give a clear opinion in the first sentence, using the adjective “polite” or the noun “politeness” correctly. Avoid unnatural expressions such as “during your life,” “the polite,” and “in the life I.” Explain two results of politeness—for example, showing respect and making communication more pleasant—and use a linking word such as “because” or “as a result.”

예시: Yes, I think politeness is very important in everyday life. It shows respect for other people and helps conversations go smoothly. In addition, when we speak politely, people usually feel more comfortable and are more willing to help us.

제안: State directly that people should be polite on all occasions, then give two clear situations instead of repeating the shopping example. Correct the grammar in “I think is anytime” and “this is a respect”; say “I think we should be polite all the time” and “this shows respect.” Use natural polite phrases, such as “Could I have this, please?” and avoid fillers like “blah, blah, blah.”

예시: I think we should be polite in almost every situation, especially when speaking to strangers or service staff. For example, when I buy something, I say, “Could I have this, please?” and “Thank you” after receiving it. We should also be polite at work or school because respectful language helps us build good relationships.

제안: Use the past tense consistently: “I always said,” not “I always say.” Replace unnatural phrases such as “show my grateful” and “use this activity” with “show my gratitude” and “show my respect.” Answer with a direct example of what you did, then explain why you did it. You can mention saying “please,” helping adults, or smiling when someone helped you.

예시: As a child, I usually showed politeness by saying “please” and “thank you” to adults and my classmates. I also smiled when someone helped me because I wanted to show my gratitude. These simple habits helped me express my respect and appreciation.

× When I was child, my mom always told me...

✓ When I was a child, my mom always told me...

The singular countable noun child needs the indefinite article a because it refers to one child in a general past situation.

× My mom always told me you should be polite to everyone.

✓ My mom always told me that I should be polite to everyone.

After told me, the indirect statement should use the pronoun I to refer to the student. The conjunction that can introduce the reported message.

× My mom and my dad teach me a lot of manner.

✓ My mom and my dad taught me a lot about manners.

The question asks about learning in the past, so teach must be changed to its past-tense form taught.

× My mom and my dad teach me a lot of manner.

✓ My mom and my dad taught me a lot about manners.

Manners is normally used as a plural noun when referring to polite behavior in general.

× When I go to the school, the teacher also will tell you.

✓ When I went to school, the teachers also taught me to be polite.

The answer describes childhood experiences, so the past-tense form went is needed. Taught is also more suitable than will tell because the teaching happened in the past.

× Yes, polite is very important during your life.

✓ Yes, politeness is very important throughout your life.

Polite is an adjective, but the sentence needs the noun politeness as the subject. Throughout is a more appropriate preposition for the whole period of a person’s life.

× Because you respect them, you say something to other people and they will feel happy.

✓ Because you respect them, when you say something to other people, they will feel happy.

People is a plural noun, so it is more accurate than other when referring to more than one person. The plural pronoun they correctly refers back to people.

× Because you say something to other you will feel they will feel happy because you respect them.

✓ When you say something politely to other people, they feel happy because they know that you respect them.

The original sentence contains two clauses joined incorrectly and repeats the subject. The correction uses a clear time clause and a main clause with a logical subject.

× So the polite is really important in the life I.

✓ So, politeness is really important in my life.

The original sentence has an incorrect word order and uses the adjective polite instead of the noun politeness. The possessive determiner my correctly describes the speaker’s life.

× I think is anytime you should be polite.

✓ I think you should be polite at any time.

The clause is missing the subject you after think. The corrected sentence has a complete subject-verb structure.

× This is a respect for the staff.

✓ This is a sign of respect for the staff.

Respect is generally an uncountable noun in this meaning, so a respect is not appropriate. The phrase a sign of respect expresses the intended meaning naturally.

× Could you blah, blah, blah, give me please?

✓ Could you please give it to me?

The adverb please is most naturally placed after the modal subject in this polite request. The object it is also needed to complete the verb give.

× When I was a child, I always say thank you to everyone.

✓ When I was a child, I always said thank you to everyone.

The phrase when I was a child refers to a past period, so the past-tense form said is required instead of say.

× The smile showed my grateful to someone who helped me.

✓ My smile showed my gratitude to someone who helped me.

Grateful is an adjective, but the sentence needs the noun gratitude after my. The possessive adjective my clearly identifies whose smile is being discussed.

× Someone help me.

✓ Someone helped me.

The help occurred in the past, so help must be changed to the past-tense form helped.

× I usually use this activity to show the respectful to them.

✓ I usually use this activity to show my respect for them.

The is not needed before the possessive adjective my. Respect is the correct noun, and the preposition for is normally used after respect when identifying the people receiving it.