Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答直接提到了父母和老师的影响，也给出了打招呼和说“please”的例子，内容方向正确。但“pilot”应改为“polite”，“to be polite to others”只需说一次；“if we want something we need someone's help”表达不自然，应改为“when we need someone's help”。此外，答案在“and just”处中断，应该用完整句结束。可以使用“First of all”和“For example”等连接词，使表达更连贯。

예시: My parents and teachers taught me to be polite when I was a child. For example, I was expected to greet my teachers and say “please” whenever I needed help. They also reminded me to say “thank you” after receiving something. These simple habits gradually became part of my daily behavior.

제안: 回答明确表达了“非常重要”的观点，并提到建立良好关系和尊重他人，内容相关。但“especially”以及“people”重复，“for strangers or some other people”不自然；可以改为“especially when we are dealing with strangers”。句子过长，且最后停在“to be”，导致意思不完整。建议按照“观点—原因—具体场景”的结构回答，并避免重复使用“vitally important”，使用更自然的“essential”或“very important”。

예시: Yes, I think being polite is essential because it helps us build positive relationships with other people. It is especially important when we are dealing with strangers, colleagues, or older people. In Chinese culture, showing respect through polite language is also considered a basic social value.

제안: 回答指出礼貌应该成为日常习惯，也提到了正式场合，这是一个清晰的基本结构。不过“shall be considered as a part of our habits”表达生硬，建议改为“should be part of our daily habits”；“which in which”和“like an interview like”属于重复和不完整表达。可以列举两个具体场合，例如面试和与陌生人交流，并说明礼貌的重要性。

예시: We should be polite in our daily lives, but it is particularly important in formal situations. For instance, we need to use respectful language during a job interview or when speaking to a teacher. We should also be polite when dealing with strangers because we want to make a good first impression.

제안: 回答提供了两个具体行为：向老师问好和得到帮助后说“thank you”，这些例子与问题非常相关。但开头“when from a very young age”和“build a habits with politeness”不自然，应改为“From a very young age, I was taught to develop polite habits”。“a habits”应为“habits”，并且句子过长，缺少清晰的连接。答案最后在“taught to not”处中断，应该补充完整内容，例如“不打断别人”或“不要大声说话”。

예시: From a very young age, I was taught to develop polite habits. I greeted my teachers when I saw them and said “thank you” whenever someone helped me. I was also taught not to interrupt people while they were speaking. These behaviors helped me become more considerate.

× When I was a child, my parents and the teachers taught me to be pilot to be pilot to others.

✓ When I was a child, my parents and my teachers taught me to be polite to others.

“pilot”是“飞行员”，这里想表达“有礼貌的”，应该使用形容词“polite”。另外，短语“to be pilot to be pilot”重复且表达错误，应改为“to be polite to others”。

× For example, if we see teachers we should stop and say hi and if we want something we need someone's help we will say please and just

✓ For example, if we see our teachers, we should stop and say hi. If we want something and need someone's help, we will say please.

原句中多个条件从句和主句连续连接，缺少清晰的连词和标点，导致句子结构混乱。第二个“if”从句中需要用“and”连接“want something”和“need someone's help”。

× For example, if we see teachers we should stop and say hi and if we want something we need someone's help we will say please and just

✓ For example, if we see our teachers, we should stop and say hi. If we want something and need someone's help, we will say please.

原句最后的“and just”没有完成句意，属于不完整表达。同时，多个从句堆叠在一起，应该拆分成两个完整句子。

× Of course, I think being polite is vitally important for us to have good relationships with others, especially especially for strangers or some other people people we need to show respect to them and I think it's a tradition in Chinese culture to be

✓ Of course, I think being polite is vitally important for us to have good relationships with others. We especially need to show respect to strangers and other people. I think it is a tradition in Chinese culture to be polite.

原句包含重复词“especially”和“people”，并且多个完整意思连接在一起，句子结构不清楚。最后的“to be”没有补充完整的表语，因此应改为完整句“to be polite”。

× We need to show respect to them.

✓ We need to show them respect.

在这里，“strangers or some other people”是被尊重的对象。更自然、清晰的表达是“show them respect”。如果使用“show respect to them”也可以理解，但在原句的复杂结构中代词指代不清，因此建议使用“show them respect”。

× Being polite shall be considered as a part of our habits in our daily lives.

✓ Being polite should be considered a part of our habits in our daily lives.

“shall”通常用于正式规定、法律或表示将来，不适合表达个人观点或一般建议。这里应使用“should”，表示“应该”。此外，“consider”后面可直接接名词短语，因此“as”可以省略。

× There are some formal occasions which in which politeness is very important.

✓ There are some formal occasions on which politeness is very important.

表示“在某些场合”时，应该使用介词“on”，所以“which in which”应改为“on which”。也可以更自然地说“formal occasions where politeness is very important”。

× There are some formal occasions on which politeness is very important like an interview like.

✓ There are some formal occasions on which politeness is very important, such as an interview.

原句最后的“like”没有完成句子，属于不完整结构。举例时使用“such as an interview”即可，不需要重复使用“like”。

× From a very young age I was taught to build a habits with politeness.

✓ From a very young age, I was taught to develop the habit of being polite.

“a”后面必须接单数可数名词，因此不能说“a habits”。应改为“the habit”。另外，“develop the habit of being polite”是表达“养成有礼貌的习惯”的自然结构。

× I was taught to build a habit with politeness.

✓ I was taught to develop the habit of being polite.

“with politeness”不是表达“有礼貌地”或“有礼貌的习惯”的自然搭配。这里应使用“the habit of being polite”，其中“of”用于连接“habit”和具体内容。

× One important point is that we are taught to not.

✓ One important point is that we are taught not to do that.

“to not”后面缺少动词，因此句子没有完成。否定不定式更自然的形式是“not to + 动词”，例如“we are taught not to interrupt others”。如果指代前文的某个行为，可以使用“not to do that”。