Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答内容切题，提到了父母和老师，但有明显的词汇和语法错误。“plate”应改为“politeness”或“polite behavior”，“plate words”应改为“polite words”，“be respectful to us”应改为“be respectful to others”。建议先直接回答，再分别说明父母和老师如何教育你，并使用“for example”连接具体例子。

예시: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents and teachers. My parents taught me to greet people warmly and use polite words such as “please” and “thank you.” Meanwhile, my teachers reminded me to respect others and listen carefully when they were speaking.

제안: 观点明确，也给出了原因，但“scene”用词错误，应改为“thing”或“quality”。“the most important”语气过强且不够自然，可以说“an essential part of daily life”。建议补充一个具体结果，例如礼貌能帮助人们建立良好关系，使回答更充分。

예시: Yes, definitely. Being polite is an essential part of daily life because it reflects your personality and upbringing. For example, saying “thank you” and listening patiently can help you build better relationships with other people.

제안: 回答覆盖了主要观点，并提到了特殊情况，但存在搭配和词性错误。“in almost every occasion”应改为“on almost every occasion”，“to the others”通常改为“to others”，“sociality”应改为“society”，“safety”应改为“safe”。“make our society be more friendly and safe”更自然。最后一句可以表达为：即使对方无礼，也应保持基本尊重，但不必过度热情。

예시: I think we should be polite on almost every occasion, especially at school, at work, and when meeting older people. Politeness makes society more friendly and safe. However, if someone is rude to us, we should remain respectful, although we do not have to be overly friendly.

제안: 回答有相关例子，但语法错误较多，且“showed my partners”表达不清，应改为“showed my politeness to others”。“I respect”应改为过去时“I respected”，“never haven't interrupted”应改为“never interrupted”，“when they are speak”应改为“when they were speaking”。建议用两个清晰的过去时例子，并用“also”或“for example”连接。

예시: As a child, I showed my politeness by being friendly to my classmates and respecting my teachers. I also listened carefully and never interrupted people while they were speaking. For example, I always waited for my teacher to finish before asking a question.

× Actually when I was a child I learned plate from my parents and my teachers.

✓ Actually, when I was a child, I learned to be polite from my parents and my teachers.

“plate”不是表示“有礼貌的”正确形容词。这里应使用“polite”。同时，“learn to be polite”是更自然、正确的表达，表示“学会有礼貌”。

× My parents told me to be friendly to others and use the plate words such as thank you and please.

✓ My parents told me to be friendly to others and use polite words such as “thank you” and “please.”

“plate words”中的“plate”使用错误。修饰“words”时应使用形容词“polite”，表示“礼貌用语”。

× At the same time my teachers reminded me to be respectful to us.

✓ At the same time, my teachers reminded me to be respectful to others.

“us”表示“我们”，通常包括说话者和其他人。根据上下文，这里想表达“尊重他人”，所以应使用“others”。

× Honestly speaking, I think we should be polite in almost every occasion.

✓ Honestly speaking, I think we should be polite on almost every occasion.

表示“在某个场合”时，通常使用介词“on”，所以应说“on almost every occasion”，而不是“in almost every occasion”。

× Being polite to the others can make our sociality be more friendly and safety.

✓ Being polite to others can make our society friendlier and safer.

“safety”是名词，不能与形容词“friendly”并列作补语。这里需要使用形容词“safe”。“friendlier and safer”保持了形容词形式的一致性。另外，“others”泛指他人时通常不加定冠词“the”。

× When I was a child, I showed my partners in almost every aspect in my life such as I was very friendly to my classmates and I respect my teachers and I never haven't interrupted to others when they are speak.

✓ When I was a child, I showed my politeness in almost every aspect of my life. For example, I was very friendly to my classmates, respected my teachers, and never interrupted others when they were speaking.

原句结构过长，并且“such as I was”不能直接引出完整句子。可以使用“For example”引出例子，并将多个行为用并列结构连接，使句子更清晰。

× When I was a child, I showed my partners in almost every aspect in my life such as I was very friendly to my classmates and I respect my teachers and I never haven't interrupted to others when they are speak.

✓ When I was a child, I showed my politeness in almost every aspect of my life. For example, I was very friendly to my classmates, respected my teachers, and never interrupted others when they were speaking.

整段描述的是童年时期的经历，因此动词应使用过去时。“respect”应改为“respected”。“never haven't interrupted”是双重否定且时态混乱，应改为“never interrupted”。

× When I was a child, I showed my partners in almost every aspect in my life such as I was very friendly to my classmates and I respect my teachers and I never haven't interrupted to others when they are speak.

✓ When I was a child, I showed my politeness in almost every aspect of my life. For example, I was very friendly to my classmates, respected my teachers, and never interrupted others when they were speaking.

“are speak”结构错误。进行时应使用“be动词+现在分词”，所以“speak”要改为“speaking”。由于句子讲的是过去的情况，因此应使用“were speaking”。

× When I was a child, I showed my partners in almost every aspect in my life such as I was very friendly to my classmates and I respect my teachers and I never haven't interrupted to others when they are speak.

✓ When I was a child, I showed my politeness in almost every aspect of my life. For example, I was very friendly to my classmates, respected my teachers, and never interrupted others when they were speaking.

“aspect of my life”表示“我生活的各个方面”，这里应使用介词“of”，而不是“in”。另外，“interrupt”后面直接接宾语，不需要介词“to”，所以应说“interrupted others”。