Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答内容直接相关，也提供了母亲教导的具体例子，但语法错误较多，影响自然度和清晰度。应将“When was a child”改为“When I was a child”，将被动结构“I just be taught”改为“I was taught”，并使用更自然的表达，如“say thank you to people who help you”和“say excuse me when you need help”。建议用“观点/经历 + 具体教导”的结构，避免重复使用“just”。

예시: When I was a child, my mother taught me to be polite. She always reminded me to say “thank you” to people who helped me and “excuse me” when I needed assistance. As a result, these expressions became natural habits for me.

제안: 回答有明确观点，也说明了礼貌能提高别人提供帮助的意愿，但表达重复且部分句子难以理解。“For example”重复出现，应只保留一次；“tell him could you help me?”应改为“ask, ‘Could you help me?’”；“they will don't help you”应改为“they probably won’t help you”。建议用一个清晰的对比：礼貌请求更容易得到帮助，而无礼的表达可能让对方不愿意回应。

예시: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it shows respect for other people. For example, if I ask someone, “Could you help me, please?”, they are more likely to respond positively. In contrast, a rude request may make them unwilling to help.

제안: 回答提到了熟人和陌生人之间的区别，内容有一定比较，但语法和句子结构较混乱。“the person who you are talking about”应改为“the person you are talking to”；“friends which is familiar with you”应改为“friends who are familiar with you”；“unfamiliar men”不够准确，建议使用“people you don’t know well”或“strangers”。同时，不应说对朋友“不需要礼貌”，更自然的观点是：即使和朋友相处，也应该保持基本礼貌，只是语气可以更随意。

예시: We should be polite whenever we interact with other people, especially in formal situations or when speaking to strangers. Although we may use a more casual tone with close friends, we should still show them basic respect. For instance, we should avoid interrupting them and remember to say “please” and “thank you.”

제안: 回答简短且相关，但存在明显的时态、冠词和词组错误。“When was the child”应改为“When I was a child”；“when I hope for someone to help me”应改为“when I wanted someone to help me”；“after the people who helped me a lot”应改为“after someone helped me”。建议补充一个具体场景，例如在向老师或陌生人寻求帮助时说“excuse me”，这样答案会更完整。

예시: When I was a child, I tried to use polite expressions in everyday situations. I said “excuse me” when I wanted to ask someone for help, and I said “thank you” after they helped me. I also tried not to interrupt adults when they were speaking.

× When was a child is just I just be taught by my mom she always told me you must say thank you for people who really helped you and say excuse me when you need some help.

✓ When I was a child, I was taught by my mom to say “thank you” to people who really helped me and “excuse me” when I needed help.

“When was a child”缺少主语I，应该说“When I was a child”。“be taught”不能用于这里的过去时和被动语态，应改为“I was taught”。“say thank you for people”中的介词错误，应该说“say thank you to people”。由于主语是I，后面的“you”应根据语境改为“me”；“need”也应改为过去式“needed”，以保持过去时一致。建议使用“when + 主语 + was/were”表达过去经历，并注意被动语态结构“be + 过去分词”。

× Yes, of course I think it's really important because for example you need somebody's help and you tell him could you help me? For example, like that, I think that man will be more willing to help you, but you just see some words that are implied and I think they will don't help you.

✓ Yes, of course. I think it’s really important because, for example, if you need somebody’s help, you can ask them, “Could you help me?” In this way, I think that person will be more willing to help you, but if you just say some impolite words, I don’t think they will help you.

询问别人是否能帮忙时，应使用“ask someone”，而不是“tell him”。“him”指代性别不明确的人时，改为更合适的单数“them”。直接引语前需要使用完整的引导结构，例如“ask them, ‘Could you help me?’”。“will don’t”不能同时使用will和do not；应该说“will not”或缩写“won’t”。此外，原句连接过多，结构不清晰，建议用“if”引导条件句，并用句号分开不同想法。

× I think it depends on the person who you are talking about. For example, if you talk to your friends which is familiar with you that I can I think it's not important for being polite because you're so familiar with each other, you know, but you talk with some unfamiliar men, then I think you must be polite.

✓ I think it depends on the person you are talking to. For example, if you talk to friends who are familiar with you, I think it is not important to be polite because you are familiar with each other. However, if you talk to unfamiliar people, then I think you must be polite.

“talk about”表示“谈论某人”，这里想表达“与某人交谈”，所以应使用“talk to”。先行词“friends”是人且为复数，关系代词应使用“who”，谓语应为复数“are”，不能使用“which is”。“that I can”使句子结构不完整，应删除。表达“做某事很重要”时，使用“important to be polite”更清晰。建议注意关系从句中的先行词、关系代词和谓语动词必须保持一致。

× When was the child I just said Excuse me when I hope for someone to help me and say thank you after the people who helped me a lot.

✓ When I was a child, I said “excuse me” when I hoped for someone to help me, and I said “thank you” to people who helped me a lot.

“When was the child”缺少主语且表达错误，应改为“When I was a child”。因为这是描述童年时的过去经历，“hope”应改为过去式“hoped”。“say thank you after the people”中的“after”使用错误；表示向帮助过自己的人道谢，应使用“say thank you to people”。原句缺少清晰的主句结构，建议使用逗号、连词“and”以及重复主语“I”来连接两个完整动作。