Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答直接，内容清楚，也提供了具体例子。可以将“in daily lives”改为更自然的“in everyday life”，并注意“say thank you and please”表达不够完整，建议说“say ‘thank you’ when someone helped me and ‘please’ when making a request”。还可以补充父母如何通过示范或提醒来培养你的礼貌习惯，使答案更具体。

예시: My parents taught me to be polite through their daily example. They reminded me to say “thank you” when someone helped me and “please” whenever I made a request. They also encouraged me to greet guests politely.

제안: 回答有明确观点和原因，但“during our work and study”不够自然，建议改为“at work and school”或“in our professional and academic lives”。“I need others help”应改为“we need other people’s help”，并且原因有些重复。可以说明礼貌如何建立良好关系、避免误解，从而让观点更加完整。

예시: Yes, definitely. Politeness is important because we interact with other people at work, at school, and in our daily lives. It helps us build good relationships and prevents unnecessary misunderstandings.

제안: 答案回应了问题，但“all of the occasions we need to be polite”语法不正确，应改为“we should be polite on all occasions”。“others help”应为“other people’s help”，而且“please”不是在别人帮助后说的，通常是在提出请求时使用。建议列举几个具体场合，例如工作、与陌生人交流、接受帮助或提出请求，并使用“for example”等连接词。

예시: We should be polite on almost all occasions, especially when speaking to strangers, teachers, colleagues, or older people. For example, we should say “please” when making a request and “thank you” when someone helps us. Being polite is particularly important in formal situations, such as job interviews.

제안: 答案有具体行为，但“taught me say”应改为“taught me to say”，“greeting with others”应改为“greet people”，并且“made me learn a lot”含义不明确。建议直接说明这些行为如何体现礼貌，例如主动打招呼、感谢别人和在请求时使用“please”。同时可以加入一个童年场景，让内容更生动。

예시: As a child, I showed politeness by greeting people whenever I met them and saying “thank you” when they helped me. I also used “please” when asking for something. For instance, I would greet my parents’ friends and offer them a seat when they visited our home.

× When I was a child, my parents showed me how to be polite in daily lives.

✓ When I was a child, my parents showed me how to be polite in daily life.

“Daily life”表示“日常生活”这一抽象概念时通常用单数形式，不需要使用复数“lives”。建议记住：life表示生活这一概念时常用不可数或单数形式。

× Yes I do. I think being polite is very important because we need to communicate with others during our work and study and I need others help during this time.

✓ Yes, I do. I think being polite is very important because we need to communicate with others during our work and study, and I need other people's help during this time.

“Others”不能直接放在名词“help”前面表示所属关系。应使用“other people's help”或“others' help”。这里表示“其他人的帮助”，所以应使用所有格形式。

× I think all of the occasions we need to be polite because during our work and study we need others help and when other people helped me we need to say thank you and please.

✓ I think we need to be polite on all occasions because during our work and study we need other people's help and when other people help us we need to say thank you and please.

表示“在所有场合”时，应使用介词“on”，所以说“on all occasions”，而不是“all of the occasions”。建议记住固定搭配：“on this occasion”“on all occasions”。

× I think all of the occasions we need to be polite because during our work and study we need others help and when other people helped me we need to say thank you and please.

✓ I think we need to be polite on all occasions because during our work and study we need other people's help and when other people help us we need to say thank you and please.

这句话表达的是一般情况和普遍规则，因此应使用一般现在时。“Helped”是一般过去时，应改为“help”。同时，“other people”对应的对象应改为“us”，使代词保持一致。

× I think all of the occasions we need to be polite because during our work and study we need others help and when other people helped me we need to say thank you and please.

✓ I think we need to be polite on all occasions because during our work and study we need other people's help and when other people help us we need to say thank you and please.

句子的主语是“we”，因此后面的宾语也应保持逻辑一致。原句使用“me”，表示“我”，但前面使用的是“we”。应改为“us”，表示“我们”。此外，“others help”应改为“other people's help”，因为这里需要所有格。

× When I was a child, my parents taught me say thank you when someone helped me and greeting with others when I met them.

✓ When I was a child, my parents taught me to say thank you when someone helped me and to greet others when I met them.

“Teach someone”后面通常使用“to do”结构，因此应说“taught me to say”。同一句中两个动作需要保持平行结构，所以应使用“to say”和“to greet”。建议记住结构：“teach someone to do something”。

× When I was a child, my parents taught me say thank you when someone helped me and greeting with others when I met them.

✓ When I was a child, my parents taught me to say thank you when someone helped me and to greet others when I met them.

“Greet”是及物动词，后面可以直接接人，不需要介词“with”。因此应说“greet others”，而不是“greeting with others”。