Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly by explaining what your mother taught you and how she taught you to behave. Correct the grammar and word choice: use “taught,” not “traits,” and avoid repeating unclear phrases. Give one or two specific examples, such as saying “please” and “thank you” or not interrupting others. Use a complete sentence and a linking word such as “because” or “so.”

예시: When I was a child, my mother taught me to be polite by reminding me to say “please” and “thank you.” She also told me not to interrupt people or make too much noise. As a result, I learned to respect others in everyday situations.

제안: State your opinion clearly and explain why politeness is important. Use natural expressions such as “Politeness is very important in our daily lives” and “people may not listen to or respect one another.” Add a specific result or example to make the answer more effective. Avoid incorrect phrases such as “badly matter” and “pupil not listening each other.”

예시: Yes, I think politeness is very important in our daily lives because it helps people communicate respectfully. If we are polite, others are more likely to listen to us and cooperate with us. For example, using polite language can prevent small disagreements from becoming serious conflicts.

제안: Your main idea is relevant: people should be polite on all occasions. Improve the grammar by saying “There is no specific occasion when we should be polite” and “on every occasion.” Complete the answer with two clear examples, such as parties, school, work, or conversations with strangers. Use “for example” to introduce supporting details and avoid ending with an incomplete phrase.

예시: We should be polite on every occasion, not just during formal events. For example, we should show good manners at parties, at school, at work, and when speaking to strangers. Being polite is especially important when we disagree with someone because it helps us maintain a respectful conversation.

제안: You give relevant and specific examples, which makes this your strongest answer. Improve the verb tenses and phrasing: say “I used to say Namaste to every guest and neighbor” and “I sometimes served food to them.” Add a short explanation of why you did these things or how your family taught you these customs. Use “also” or “in addition” to connect the examples naturally.

예시: As a child, I used to say Namaste to every guest and neighbor who visited our home. I also helped serve food and drinks to them. My parents taught me that greeting visitors and helping them were important ways to show respect.

× When I was a child, my mother traits me that if I make noise I'll make noise I beat some I beat someone the

✓ When I was a child, my mother taught me that if I made noise, I would disturb someone.

The answer refers to a past situation, so taught and made should be in the past tense. The original verb traits is incorrect; the past tense of teach is taught. The conditional result should also use would rather than will because it describes a past situation.

× When I was a child, my mother traits me that if I make noise I'll make noise I beat some I beat someone the

✓ When I was a child, my mother taught me that if I made noise, I would disturb someone.

The original answer contains repeated and incomplete phrases, so the ideas are not connected in a clear sentence. Use one complete if-clause followed by a complete result clause. Avoid repeating phrases such as I make noise and I beat someone.

× Yes, politeness is badly matter with in our life without politeness pupil not listening each other.

✓ Yes, politeness matters greatly in our lives. Without politeness, people do not listen to each other.

Badly is not used correctly before matter in the original sentence. Matter is a verb here, so it can be modified by greatly. Alternatively, you could say politeness is very important. The phrase in our lives is the natural expression.

× Yes, politeness is badly matter with in our life without politeness pupil not listening each other.

✓ Yes, politeness matters greatly in our lives. Without politeness, people do not listen to each other.

The plural noun lives is more appropriate when speaking about life in general. Pupil is singular, but the sentence makes a general statement, so people is a better plural subject. Each other is used correctly with the plural subject people.

× Yes, politeness is badly matter with in our life without politeness pupil not listening each other.

✓ Yes, politeness matters greatly in our lives. Without politeness, people do not listen to each other.

This answer gives a general opinion, so use the present simple. The correct forms are matters and do not listen. The original phrase pupil not listening is missing an auxiliary verb and uses an inappropriate verb form.

× There is no specific occasion when we should polite we have to be polite in every occasion whatever occasion is that like parties or

✓ There is no specific occasion when we should be polite. We have to be polite on every occasion, whatever it is, for example, at parties.

The original answer joins several complete ideas without suitable punctuation or a conjunction. Also, should polite is incomplete because the adjective polite needs the verb be. Separating the ideas into two sentences makes the answer clear and complete.

× There is no specific occasion when we should polite we have to be polite in every occasion whatever occasion is that like parties or

✓ There is no specific occasion when we should be polite. We have to be polite on every occasion, whatever it is, for example, at parties.

Use on with the expression on every occasion, not in every occasion. Use at parties when referring to a social event or location. These fixed preposition combinations will make the answer sound more natural.

× As a child I usually did Namaste to every guest and neighbors and sometimes I serve food to them

✓ As a child, I usually greeted every guest and neighbor, and sometimes I served food to them.

The question asks about childhood actions, so the verbs should be in the past tense. Served is the past tense of serve. Greeted is also a natural past-tense verb for describing how you showed politeness.

× As a child I usually did Namaste to every guest and neighbors and sometimes I serve food to them

✓ As a child, I usually greeted every guest and neighbor, and sometimes I served food to them.

After every, use a singular noun. Therefore, every guest and neighbor is correct, not every guest and neighbors. If you want to use plural nouns, you could say all the guests and neighbors.