Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答结构较好，有直接回应但语言有小错误与冗余。应注意动词时态和主谓一致（例如“they believed”或“they believe”可根据语境选择），避免重复表达“because they believe good manners are important”可简化并补充具体例子以丰富内容。尝试用连接词加入更多细节。

예시: My parents taught me to say "please" and "thank you" from a young age because they believed good manners matter. For example, they praised me when I thanked someone, which encouraged me to keep doing it.

제안: 答案有严重词汇和表达错误（将“polite”误说为“proud”），句子不完整且逻辑混乱。需要纠正关键词，保持句子完整并使用连接词（for example, therefore, because）来支撑观点。补充具体例子并完整表达结果。

예시: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps build strong relationships and smooth collaboration. For example, I use respectful language at work, so my colleagues are more willing to help me when I need assistance.

제안: 存在同样的词汇错误（将“polite”误为“proud”）和少许语法问题（例如“makes social interactions smoothly”应为“makes social interactions smoother”或“run smoothly”）。可以保持简洁直接的主题句，使用连接词并给出更具体场景或对比。

예시: We should be polite in public, especially when meeting strangers or interacting with service staff, because it creates a good impression. For example, greeting a waiter kindly can lead to faster and friendlier service.

제안: 回答内容具体且有例子，但有词语与语法错误（“please add thank you”应为“please and thank you”；“which I wanted to show this back”含混不清）。建议使用更自然的表达并把句子分为主题句与支持句，用连接词清楚呈现原因或目的。

예시: As a child, I always said "please" and "thank you" to my parents and teachers. I also helped elderly neighbors with small chores, such as carrying shopping bags, to show my respect and gratitude.

× Yes, I think being proud is very important because it helps me build good relationships and get along with others.

✓ Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps me build good relationships and get along with others.

原句中使用了形容词“proud”（自豪的），与语境不符，应使用“polite”（有礼貌的）。这是形容词使用错误，改为“polite”使句子语义与提问（礼貌）一致。建议在类似句子中根据上下文选择恰当形容词。

× For the example, I show respect and use practical language when I ever work.

✓ For example, I show respect and use polite language when I work.

原句结构混乱：“For the example”应为“For example”；“practical language”语义不合且不常用于表达礼貌，应改为“polite language”；“when I ever work”中“ever”位置和用法不当，去掉即可。整体调整保证句子通顺并符合语境。

× My colleague is willing to

✓ My colleague is willing to do the same.

原句不完整，缺少动词或宾语，导致句子无谓语或未表达完整意思。补充“do the same”使句子完整并明确同事也会这样做。建议检查句子是否有主谓宾结构完整。

× We should be proud in public.

✓ We should be polite in public.

句中使用“proud”（自豪）不符合讨论礼貌的语境，应使用“polite”（有礼貌的）。这是形容词选用错误，改为“polite”与问题一致。

× For example when meeting strangers and service staff, being respectful helps create a good impression and makes social interactions smoothly.

✓ For example, when meeting strangers and service staff, being respectful helps create a good impression and makes social interactions run smoothly.

原句中“smoothly”位置和搭配不当，通常与动词短语“run smoothly”搭配。并且“For example”后应加逗号。修改后语法与习惯搭配更自然。

× When I was a child, I always said please add thank you to my parents and teachers.

✓ When I was a child, I always said “please” and “thank you” to my parents and teachers.

原句中“said please add thank you”结构不正确，且缺少引号或逗号分隔礼貌用语。改为引号标示短语并在动词后直接加宾语，语法清晰。

× Also I helped the elderly with small chores like carrying shopping bags, which I wanted to show this back.

✓ Also I helped the elderly with small chores like carrying shopping bags to show my gratitude.

原句“which I wanted to show this back”结构混乱且含代词重复（this 与 which 指代不明），应改为不定式短语“to show my gratitude”或“to give something back”来表达回报心意，句子更简洁清晰。