Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不清晰且语法错误较多。建议用一句主题句直接回答问题（例如：I learned politeness mainly from my parents），然后用1–2句具体细节说明是谁教的、怎样教的、以及一个具体例子。注意发音和单词准确（如polite而不是black），句子不要太长，最多5句。可以用连接词例如“for example”或“they would”来衔接细节。

예시: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. They always reminded me to say “please” and “thank you” and set an example by being respectful to others. For example, when guests visited our home, my mother taught me to greet them and offer a seat, which helped me practice politeness regularly.

제안: 回答重复且结构混乱。建议先直接回答（例如：Yes, I think it is very important），然后用一到两句说明原因和具体效果。使用连词如“because”或“so”来组织理由，并避免重复相同信息。确保动词时态和主谓一致。

예시: Yes, I think it is very important because politeness helps build good relationships. For example, being polite can make people more willing to help you at work or school, and it creates a friendly atmosphere.

제안: 回答含混不清且缺乏具体场景。建议先给出一个清晰的总述（例如：We should be polite in many situations），然後列举两三个具体场景并用连接词（for example, when, such as）说明。每个场景用简短明确的句子表达。

예시: We should be polite in many everyday situations. For example, when talking to teachers or elders, when meeting new people, and when asking for help at shops or offices. Being polite in these situations shows respect and makes communication smoother.

제안: 回答有用意但表达重复且词序不当。建议用一句主题句（例如：I showed politeness by using polite phrases），再给一两个具体做法或例子。使用短句并注意常用礼貌用语的正确顺序（please, thank you, excuse me）。

예시: I showed politeness by using polite phrases such as “please”, “thank you” and “excuse me”. For example, I always thanked my parents when they helped me with homework and said “please” when asking for something.

× Yes, I think to learn to be black as a child is very important.

✓ Yes, I think learning to be polite as a child is very important.

原句结构混乱且用词错误："to learn to be black" 是不合适的表达，且不符合句子习惯。应使用动名词短语 "learning to be polite" 表示作为名词的动作。建议使用动名词构成主语（learning），并用正确词汇 polite（礼貌）。

× Actually when I was a child, my parents taught me teachers Teacher also very light.

✓ Actually, when I was a child, my parents and teachers taught me to be polite and respectful.

原句结构混乱，重复并缺少必要动词短语。原句没有清晰的宾语和不定式结构。应合并主语（parents and teachers），并使用不定式短语（taught me to be...）来表达被教导的内容。

× It is very important in the Chemist hospital.

✓ It is very important in hospitals and public places.

原句中 "Chemist hospital" 用法不当且含义不明确。应使用复数或更一般的场所表达（hospitals, public places）。另外，语境要求说明礼貌在公共场所的重要性。

× Yes, I think it's very important.

✓ Yes, I think it is very important.

此句主要为风格问题，"it's" 是缩写形式，改为完整形式更正式。第三人称单数动词 "is" 与主语 it 一致。

× When I was a child, my parents and teacher was taught me was taught me very de like to somebody and it was very good if you are.

✓ When I was a child, my parents and teachers taught me to be polite and to like and respect other people; that was very good for me.

原句存在主谓不一致（parents and teacher 与 was）、重复（was taught me），以及句子缺乏逻辑。修正后将主语并列为 "parents and teachers"，动词用过去式 "taught"，并用不定式说明教的内容。解释用简体中文：原句主谓不一致、重复并且缺少清晰的宾语，建议确认主语单复数并使用适当的动词形式及明确表达要点。

× I was asking in my own life when the observance should play the people Start such as to talk to someone students come to talk to someone.

✓ I mean, in my life, we should be polite when meeting people — for example, when talking to someone or when students meet teachers.

原句乱序且词汇使用错误（observance, play the people, Start）。需重组句子，先说明普遍情况，再给出例子。建议先用连接词（for example），并用清晰短语（when talking to someone; when students meet teachers）。

× That's why when I was talk to my parents or teachers, I sometimes I sometimes I really speak thank you all please to show my life as a child.

✓ That's why when I talked to my parents or teachers, I sometimes said "thank you" and "please" to show politeness as a child.

原句时态和结构混乱（when I was talk），还有大量重复（I sometimes I sometimes）。应使用过去时（talked）与过去行为（said），并用引号标示常用礼貌用语。建议删除重复并按过去时叙述行为。