Politeness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 在回答中注意时态与主谓一致，简化表达并用连词使句子更连贯。可以把开头的时间状语改成正确形式（"When I was a child"），把动词和单复数调整好（"these small gestures show"），并用一到两个连接词（例如"for example", "also"）使论述更清晰。尽量控制在三到四句内，避免重复。

예시: When I was a child, my parents taught me to be polite. For example, they always reminded me to say "hello" to people I know and to say "thank you" when someone held the door for me. They believed these small gestures show respect and make everyday interactions more pleasant.

제안: 注意用词准确性和句子逻辑，避免发音或拼写错误（"planet"应为"politeness"或"being polite"），并不要使用不明确或无关的短语（如"I also stand as your / your face of the country"）。给出一到两个具体理由并用连接词（"because", "so"）连贯表达。

예시: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it is a basic social ethic that makes people feel respected and comfortable. For example, politeness can ease conflicts and help create a positive impression when representing your community or country.

제안: 注意句子结构和介词使用，使表达更自然（例如说"in our daily life, at work, and at school"），用连词"for example"或"such as"给出具体场景，并保持回答简洁不重复。

예시: I think we should be polite on all occasions, not only on special ones. For example, we should be polite in our daily life, at work, and at school because it helps build respect and stronger relationships.

제안: 改进语法与表达顺序，使用正确短语（如"greet them", "say please and thank you"），去掉含糊或不正确的句子（如"I will say that you will come"），并提供一两个具体例子说明情景。控制句数在三到四句之内。

예시: As a child I did small things to show politeness, such as greeting people I knew and always saying "please" and "thank you." Sometimes I would help others and offer to carry things for them, which showed respect and made relationships closer.

× When was a child, my parents always told me to be polite.

✓ When I was a child, my parents always told me to be polite.

句子缺少主语“I”。这是一般过去时的背景句，但原句开头应为时间状语从句“When I was a child”。建议在时间状语中加上主语“I”。（简体中文）

× For example, they told me that to say hello when I meet some person I know and to say thank you when someone hold the door for me.

✓ For example, they told me to say hello when I meet someone I know and to say thank you when someone holds the door for me.

1) 不需要‘that’引导不定式，直接用‘told me to do’结构。2) 'some person' 用法不自然，改为 'someone'。3) 主语'someone'是第三人称单数，谓语动词应为'should hold/holds'，此处用一般现在时'should'可省，保留'should'亦可；在此改为 'holds' 以符合主谓一致。（简体中文）

× Umm, they often remind me that this small gestures in daily life shows respect to others.

✓ Umm, they often reminded me that these small gestures in daily life show respect for others.

1) 与前句时态一致应使用过去时 'reminded'。2) 'this small gestures' 主谓和指示词不一致，应为 'these small gestures'（复数）。3) 动词与主语复数一致，改为 'show' 而非 'shows'。4) 常用搭配为 'show respect for somebody'。建议注意指示代词与名词数的一致以及动词和主语的一致。（简体中文）

× Yes, I think planet is quite important 'cause it's a basic ethic that make people feel respected and comfortable.

✓ Yes, I think politeness is quite important because it's a basic ethic that makes people feel respected and comfortable.

1) 原句把 'politeness' 错写成 'planet'（词形错误，属于词汇选择/拼写问题，但在给定列表中归为形容/副词使用错误）。2) 'that make' 主语是 'a basic ethic'（单数），谓语动词应为 'makes'。3) ' 'cause' 应用完整形式 'because' 更正式。建议注意单词拼写和主谓一致。（简体中文）

× So I always try to be polite when I meet other person and I also stand as your.

✓ So I always try to be polite when I meet other people and I also stand as yours.

1) 'other person' 应为复数 'other people'。2) 'stand as your' 句子不完整且代词错误，可能想说 'stand as yours' 但更自然表达需根据意图改为 'represent my country' 或 'stand as your representative'。这里仅按原意将 'your' 改为 'yours' 仍不太自然，建议用更明确的表达。注意名词单复数和代词形式。（简体中文）

× Umm being polite is throughout in our daily life, our work, study or meet the person you all know.

✓ Umm, being polite is present throughout our daily life, whether at work, at school, or when meeting people you know.

1) 'is throughout' 用法不自然，应改为 'is present throughout' 或 'is important throughout'。2) 并列名词短语需一致形式，改为 'work, school' 并用介词 'at'。3) 'meet the person you all know' 结构错误，改为 'when meeting people you know'。建议注意固定搭配和并列结构的一致性。（简体中文）

× It helps to build respect and better relationships.

✓ It helps build respect and better relationships.

动词 'help' 后可接不带 to 的动词原形 'build' 或不定式 'to build'，两者均可。为更简洁常用 'helps build'。无其他语法错误，仅为更地道的表达建议。（简体中文）

× Just some small things like when I meet someone I know I will greet at them and always say please thank you and sometimes when I help other I will say that you will come.

✓ Just some small things like when I met someone I knew I would greet them and always say 'please' and 'thank you', and sometimes when I helped others I would say 'you are welcome'.

1) 回忆过去应使用过去时：'meet'→'met'，'know'→'knew'，'will'→'would'，'help'→'helped'。2) 'greet at them' 是错误搭配，应为 'greet them'。3) 'please thank you' 需要分开并加引号或逗号；'say that you will come' 语义不清，可能想表达 'say